Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Rhyme

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December 16, 2023

"Nursery Rhymes or Stories" Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Eve Roper

FIRST  PLACE

Holiday Spirit

A city of festivities glitter bright
To celebrate a special joyful night,
Gingerbread man boogies with delight,
Snowmen waltz, what a charming sight!

He is decorated with a galore of candy,
Friends excited to find those sweets handy,
Reason to be gratefully elated and happy
As incredibly thankful as they could ever be!

The city looks enchanting with softest snow,
Silvery laces on rooftops magically glow,
Holiday season for all fairy tale souls,
Be merry, celebrate the night at North Pole.

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Silent One December 26, 2023 at 6:15 AM Lovely poem for the contest.. Congratulations on your placement Malabika Ray Choudhury December 26, 2023 at 2:01 PM Thank you so much, Dear Poet. Delighted to receive your comments and feedback. I am sure I have a long way to go in my literary journey.

Valsa George December 25, 2023 at 4:33 AM Mala, I remember you are an expert at writing nursery rhymes. Enjoyed the light hearted Christmas poem with its excellent rhyming. Both children and adults will enjoy this merry Christmas celebration. Congratulations on your first place win! Malabika Ray Choudhury December 26, 2023 at 1:58 PM Dear Valsa, I am not an expert - still I feel so delighted and honoured with your comment. I taught little children for a few years, and really enjoyed it. The best part of my job was reading poems and stories to the little ones. Hope you are having a great holiday! A Happy New Year to you and all your loved ones.

Eve Roper December 24, 2023 at 10:11 PM Malabika, congratulations on your win. Have a Merry Christmas. Malabika Ray Choudhury December 26, 2023 at 1:55 PM Dear Eve, Thank you so much. I feel honoured with the placement. Your contests are great opportunities for me to write for children. Happy New Year to you and your loving family.

Christina Bowring December 24, 2023 at 8:56 AM Back again dear Mala to say many congratulations on your very worthy win with this enchanting poem. Well done! Merry Christmas to you. Hugs and blessings xx Malabika Ray Choudhury December 26, 2023 at 1:53 PM Thank you so much, Dear Christina. Your comments are blessings to me - hope I can learn from you, and other poets on this site, and continue to write more. Happy New Year to you! Love and Hugs, Dear Friend.

Linda Alice Fowler December 24, 2023 at 7:22 AM Christmas festivities, magical and merry. Congratulations dear Mala! :) Linda Alice Fowler December 24, 2023 at 8:44 AM May the new Year bring many blessings your way! hugs :) Malabika Ray Choudhury December 24, 2023 at 8:23 AM Thank you so much, Dear Linda. Your presence and comments are absolute delights, especially among the festivities. Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones!

Paghunda Zahid December 23, 2023 at 10:48 PM Hi, congratulations on your win, Malaika. Cheers Malabika Ray Choudhury December 24, 2023 at 8:22 AM Thank you so much, Dear Friend, for reading and congratulating. Writing for children is an absolute delight.

Paula Goldsmith December 23, 2023 at 11:20 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful/fun write again. Have A Very Blessed Christmas.................. Malabika Ray Choudhury December 24, 2023 at 8:20 AM Thank you so much, Dear Paula. Your kind and loving comments are very much appreciated.

Vijay Pandit December 18, 2023 at 4:00 PM Delightful tenor to your poem, Mala--echoing festive sprit. Splendid imagery enhance the joy of the season. Malabika Ray Choudhury December 24, 2023 at 8:20 AM Thank you so much, Dear Vijay! Your presence here is an absolute delight! Appreciate your kind comment. Merry Christmas!

Christina Bowring December 18, 2023 at 10:35 AM Dear, sweet Mala, what a joy to read full of captivating holiday spirit. Such delightful things - gingerbread man, snowmen, candy, snow - perfect ingredients for an enchanting, fairytale, magical night. A wonderful story for both children and adults to enjoy. Loved this. Good luck in the contest dear, sweet one. Love and seasonal hugs xx :):) Malabika Ray Choudhury December 24, 2023 at 8:18 AM Thank you so much, Dear Hiya. Delighted to read your kind comment. It's a joy to write for children, especially at this festive time! Merry Christmas!

Hiya Sharma December 18, 2023 at 7:37 AM Oh this is such a whimsical and joyful write, gleaming with shimmering magick of the festivities.. I love your descriptions here, especially "Snowmen waltz", "enchanting with softest snow", "Silvery laces on rooftops magically glow" A beautifully splendid piece this is, dear poetess, exquisitely crafted for the contest :) Malabika Ray Choudhury December 18, 2023 at 9:01 AM Thank you so much, Dear Hiya! In my teaching career, I taught little children for a few years. I feel, that was one of my best experiences in life! Love writing for children - Dr. Seuss and Roald Dahl are my favourite writers. Truly appreciate your feedback - your poems are truly amazing! Love and Hugs ~

Paula Goldsmith December 17, 2023 at 7:22 AM A wonderful/fun write. The kids will love it... "Good Luck" Looks like we both did this one. Have a great day................... Malabika Ray Choudhury December 18, 2023 at 8:58 AM Thank you, Paula. Fun to write for children. I am sure, yours is a great one!

Silent One December 16, 2023 at 11:24 AM This is lovely, flows so well.. Malabika Ray Choudhury December 16, 2023 at 5:22 PM Thank you. Appreciate your comments. Merry Christmas!