Holiday of a Lifetime

"A week long holiday in a glass paperweight" that holds a dandelion puff.
We remember childhood wishes. All day long we tiptoe 'round it being careful not to sneeze.  Imagine the clouds of seeds that would fill the dome and all our pockets 
We dress appropriately for dandelion watching, attending sneeze- supression classes in the evenings.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Smith Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 10:58 AM
Love this, great work Suzanne...
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 3:27 AM
Dandelions always entertain, with a breath, and certainly a sneeze! Very sweet SuZ. How are you? : ) xxoo
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 3:31 PM
so CUTE and creative this is!!!
Delaney Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 9:03 PM
Thanks Andrea......sometimes my mind goes to strange locations....lol
Evans Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 1:31 PM
How visual and thought provoking this poem is-
Wigley Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 12:14 AM
Made me smile, Suzy D. Hope you're well. Viv x
Gauthier Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 10:59 PM
Most charming and adorable, Suzanne.
Pandit Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 4:11 PM
Splendid imagination SuZ! A fun read!
Delaney Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 6:10 PM
Hi Vijay : So good to see you. I haven’t been checking in lately but will be doing more reading and commenting soon. Hope all is well with you. SuZ
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