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Holiday of a Lifetime

"A week long holiday in a glass paperweight" that holds a dandelion puff. We remember childhood wishes. All day long we tiptoe 'round it being careful not to sneeze. Imagine the clouds of seeds that would fill the dome and all our pockets We dress appropriately for dandelion watching, attending sneeze- supression classes in the evenings.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/14/2018 10:58:00 AM
Love this, great work Suzanne...
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Date: 7/9/2018 3:27:00 AM
Dandelions always entertain, with a breath, and certainly a sneeze! Very sweet SuZ. How are you? : ) xxoo
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Date: 7/3/2018 3:31:00 PM
so CUTE and creative this is!!!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/3/2018 9:03:00 PM
Thanks Andrea......sometimes my mind goes to strange locations....lol
Date: 6/30/2018 1:31:00 PM
How visual and thought provoking this poem is-
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Date: 6/24/2018 12:14:00 AM
Made me smile, Suzy D. Hope you're well. Viv x
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Date: 6/11/2018 10:59:00 PM
Most charming and adorable, Suzanne.
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Date: 6/11/2018 4:11:00 PM
Splendid imagination SuZ! A fun read!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/11/2018 6:10:00 PM
Hi Vijay : So good to see you. I haven’t been checking in lately but will be doing more reading and commenting soon. Hope all is well with you. SuZ

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