Holiday Limericks

   There once was a young lady, called Louise,
   Who spent her vacation, down on the Keys.
   While trying hard to impress,
   She wore a small, frilly dress.
   But the sea breeze, showed much more than her knees.

   The boys all whistled, and hoped she'd reprise,
   While their girlfriends hissed, and called her a tease.
   Then as she pulled down her dress,
   Her top left nothing to guess.
   Where for photographs, she smiled and said cheese.

   11 / 1 / 2024.)
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Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 11:00 AM
Miss Modesty not! Congrats on your win.
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December 7, 2024 at 3:39 AM
Hi Andrea, i must agree with you. I remember a time when a young lady was frowned upon, for having a hole in the knee, of her bathing suit. Thanks for your kind comments. My regards George.
Kitchin Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 11:45 AM
George, a funny and clever limerick set, congratulations on your winning placement.
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December 7, 2024 at 3:40 AM
Hi Tania, thanks for commenting so kindly, on my limerick. I really do appreciate it. My regards to you George.
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