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red and gold leaves sway
whirlwind in stores' parking lot....
papers of life stir   



Contest: Fall Or Winter Holiday Haiku
Date: 11-14-21
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

Holiday day trip about the only holiday we can go on now. Got to eat out..In the parking lot were leaves intermixed with store receipts, chewing gum wrappers, and other small papers from customers. 

1red and gold leaves sway 5
2whirlwind in stores' parking lot.... 7
3papers of life stir 5

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 12/13/2021 7:26:00 PM

That final line in your Haiku is most creative + original. Three golden lines, indeed. Congratulations! Brian

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/14/2021 4:00:00 AM

Brian, Thank you for stopping by with congrats. Your comments encourage. Sara

Howard Kerr

Date: 12/4/2021 3:53:00 AM

Sara, I really love this imaginative work. Congratulations Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/4/2021 5:00:00 AM

Thank you, Howard. I appreciate you stopping by with congrats. Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/30/2021 8:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A pretty write and picture. Have a blessed day................

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/30/2021 10:13:00 AM

Paula, I appreciate your visit to my page. Your comments are uplifting. Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 11/29/2021 6:24:00 PM

Sara, great imagery. Congratulations on your win in Tania's contest. Hugs and lots of love Eve

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/30/2021 5:19:00 AM

Eve, I appreciate you dropping by to say congrats. Your kindness is appreciated. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2021 7:13:00 PM

very original, Sara. congrats

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/29/2021 2:31:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the visit with congrats. Sara

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/26/2021 12:44:00 PM

Sara, a creative one, congratulations on your winning placement!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/26/2021 1:08:00 PM

Why thank you, Tania. I appreciate you dropping by to let me know I placed. Sara

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 11/22/2021 7:08:00 AM

I enjoyed the atmosphere you are painting with words ...

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/22/2021 1:58:00 PM

Kai, Thank you for the kind review of my work. Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 11/18/2021 7:48:00 AM

enjoying this beauty again

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/20/2021 3:55:00 AM

Why, thank you, Jack. I appreciate the nice review. Sara

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 11/17/2021 3:04:00 AM

Nice haiku Sara, the leaves are rapidly falling here, just memories of summer now..Delice

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/20/2021 3:51:00 AM

Delice, Yes, it is about the same here but there are still some that are a delight to see and enjoy but winter is approaching. I appreciate the visit and nice comment. Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/15/2021 2:40:00 PM

Hi Sara, This is such a good entry for the contest. You described the fall season in a few words Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/16/2021 8:39:00 AM

Alexis, I appreciate the nice comment. I believe this will be a good day. Sara

Judy Ball

Date: 11/15/2021 7:56:00 AM

Lovely Sara. A winner in my book and love the tree. God Bless and good luck in the contest. JB

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/15/2021 1:59:00 PM

Thank you for the encouraging words. Sara