Holiday Haiku

holiday haiku

still midnight snowfall
 veils umber branches artwork ~
  holly berries glow

11-12-21
Contest: Fall Winter Holiday Haiku
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

Syllables Checked: howmanysyllables
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Radice Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 2:10 PM
The colours you paint bring your words to life. Cheers - Gary
Kauffman Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 9:48 AM
Gary, many thanks coming your way! There is something very special about the contrast of colors of winter and the holidays - white against shadows and red against green. I hope you have a very Happy Christmas. Holiday cheers to you!
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November 30, 2021 at 2:47 PM
Sam, congratulations on your winning entry in Tania's contest! Magical imagery! Blessings, Paulette
Kauffman Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 10:49 AM
Hi Paulette! Thank you so much. For me a wintery midnight snow is indeed magical. Sending you all the blessings of this wonderful Christmas season.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 8:57 AM
Congratulations on your win. Few words with much said. Love It. Have a blessed day writing away...................
Kauffman Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 2:08 PM
Hi Paula! Thank you so much. I have so enjoyed learning to write haiku here on the soup! Still have much to learn. Every time I think about flowers and flower arranging I think of you! Christmas flowers are a joy indeed. Sending you all the blessings of the Christmas season my friend!
Roper Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 6:50 PM
Sam, lovely imagery. Congratulations on your win in Tania's contest. Hugs and lots of love Eve
Kauffman Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 2:05 PM
Thank you so much Eve! I love the challenge of creating a picture with seventeen syllables! This win was a complete surprise! Sending you Advent Christmas blessings, much love and lots of hugs!
Kendrick Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 3:26 AM
I have read your winning work and was delighted that it was in the winners' list. Congrats. Sara
Kauffman Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 2:03 PM
Thank you Sara! So fun this one on the winners list - truly a wintery blessing! Sending you all the blessings of the Christmas season and hope you are doing well!
Daniel Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 1:12 AM
This is so enchanting, Sam, congratulations:)
Kauffman Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 9:54 AM
Thank you so much Jo. Watching the snowfall at night is one of my very favorite things to do. Hypnotizing and soothing! Sending you all of the blessings of this holiday season. Hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving!
Dietrich Avatar
November 28, 2021 at 6:41 PM
well, i said it was one of the best and I was sure right! Congrats, Sam
May Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 5:08 AM
Congrats on a fine write and win Sam
Kauffman Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 2:02 PM
Have been having fun learning to write haiku - challenging yet very gratifying! So grateful for your note of congratulations and all of your support! Blessings!
Jones Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 9:46 PM
Congrats on a win
Kauffman Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 1:59 PM
Thank you so much Karen. PS has been a great teacher of haiku and other forms - such an enjoyable adventure! Sending you many blessings!
Sambourne Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 9:14 PM
Another winner, Sam. Your pen soars. Many congratulations! Brian
Kauffman Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 1:56 PM
Thank you for your visit and congratulatory note Brian! I am finding I do love writing haiku. So much can be created in seventeen syllables! All the best!
Allison Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 4:18 PM
what gorgeous imagery Sam, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Kauffman Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 1:54 PM
Many thanks Jan! I love standing at a window watching midnight snow! So poetically hypnotizing and inspiring. Sending you lots of holiday hugs :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 1:29 PM
Congratulations, Sam! Pretty imagery!
Kauffman Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 1:51 PM
Thank you so much Kim! A snow filled winter midnight is truly an inspiring moment. Blessings!
Kitchin Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 12:12 PM
Sam, gorgeous imagery, congratulations on your first place win!
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November 29, 2021 at 9:52 AM
Tania, thank you so much. I am honored by your placement among so many wonderful entries. So grateful for this wonderful contest theme and all that you do here on the soup! Sending you all of the blessings of this holiday season!
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November 23, 2021 at 7:28 PM
That is simply beautiful Sam, love each line, the second line is outstanding, love it… Belle
Kauffman Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 1:50 PM
Thank you so much Belle. The stillness of a snowy night is so enchanting! Sending you all the blessings of the season!
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November 21, 2021 at 3:15 AM
Marvelous, my friend, Sam! Blessings.
Kauffman Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 11:45 AM
Thank you dear friend! And what is really marvelous is to see your smiling face :D and receive your visit. That is a blessing. Sending you all the blessings of the season. Happy Thanksgiving.
Sands Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 3:26 PM
Oh, this is excellent ! A fave for me. I love the glowing holly berries too :)
Kauffman Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 11:35 AM
Thank you so much Heidi! I am thrilled by your fav. Winter is a season of such contrasts. In the stillness beauty - in the black and white punches of color! Sending you all the blessings of the season. Happy Thanksgiving!
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November 18, 2021 at 6:52 AM
So beautiful Sam - a perfect haiku with creative images! midnight snowfall is enchanting! Love ~ Mala
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November 18, 2021 at 9:12 AM
Mala, thank you so much. A snowy midnight is enchanting indeed with a wonderful hypnotic quality. I could stand at the window at watch the snowfall for what seems like hours. It never fails to draw me into its magic! Sending you hugs and much love. Sam
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November 17, 2021 at 9:27 AM
A nice winter Haiku Sam...beautiful imagery, soothing and peaceful...Best wishes and hugs...~ Ani
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November 18, 2021 at 9:08 AM
Thank you Ani! I never thought of a snowy winter night as "soothing" but it is so true! Love your perception :) Many thanks for your lovely message. Sending you hugs and blessings!
Kendrick Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 1:29 PM
Enjoyed reading this one. It is very creative and descriptive. I can see the scene on a cold winter night. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for your uplifting comments on my work. Sara
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November 18, 2021 at 9:05 AM
Hi Sara, so glad this write invited you into the serenity of a snowy night - one of the most beautiful scenes I can imagine. Hope you are doing well. Sending you all the blessings of this Thanksgiving season.
Horsman Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 8:32 PM
Beautiful winter scene.
Kauffman Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 7:26 PM
Harry, thank you so much! Sending you the serenity of a wintery night! Blessings!!
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 10:17 AM
wow, I think this is one of the best I've seen in the contest so far!
Kauffman Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 7:25 PM
I am deely honored by your message Andrea! Thank you! I do love writing haiku - creating a picture from a snippet of time. Blessings dear friend.
Cunningham Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 11:57 PM
You create a stunning Christmas image Sam, good luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Over Fork Over. Tom
Kauffman Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 9:31 AM
Thank you so much Tom! A peaceful winter snowfall is an amazing blessing at Christmas - definitely heavenly peace and beauty that we can drink in like a soothing cup of tea! Have a wonderful weekend! Over Fork Over!
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November 12, 2021 at 7:50 PM
This has all the beauty of a gentle snow at night, with the red berries peeking through, so tranquil and spiritual~
Kauffman Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 9:27 AM
Michelle, thank you! I was hoping to capture that peaceful spirit of a midnight snowfall. Snowy winter nights are among my favorite winter experiences. And, even though prickly, I do love holly with its bright berries. Hoping our little holly tree will have berries this year. I so appreciate your feedback and your support. Many thanks my friend. Sending you the tranquility of snowy winter nights!
Poet Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 7:39 PM
Great Haiku, Sam, I enjoyed reading it, and best wishes with the contest.
Kauffman Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 9:21 AM
Hi Lasaad! I am so glad you enjoyed this snippet of a winter night. Thank you for your lovely message and best wishes. They are a blessing! Sending you the blessings of the season.
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