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Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

Contest: Santa, Elf, Rudolph 

Holiday Fun

Santa, Elf and Rudolph argued about - 
Whose charisma Christmas can’t do without. 
Santa bragged all human kind 
Loves him as a mastermind. 
Elfy turned green, Rudolph pouted his snout. 

Elfy then struck a pose: “A cocky claim!
Despite the fact that all elves look the same, 
Our gifts and toys are diverse 
All around the Universe - 
To rate our role just second best? For shame!”

Rudolph pranced on his dignity with pride, 
Took his conceited co-workers aside. 
Explained that without his sleigh 
Gifts won’t see the light of day. 
Neigh! And off he flounced for a joyful ride!
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Goldsmith Avatar
January 26, 2025 at 9:20 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun write. Have a fun day with your win as you write away..................
Kitchin Avatar
January 26, 2025 at 4:35 AM
Margarita, congratulations on your first place win, a fun and witty collection.
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 10:56 PM
Aw, so cute! I wish I'd seen this before Christmas, my grandson would have loved it. He is a very deep thinking little five year old, this would be very thought provoking for him!
Edmonds  Avatar
December 17, 2024 at 4:13 PM
Love the Limerick’s Margarita. Christmas needs Santa, Rudolph and Elf - He just can’t manage all by himself - They all play their parts - In our children’s hearts - Otherwise toys would stay on the shelf.…… Beryl
Lillico  Avatar
December 17, 2024 at 4:38 PM
Thanks for stopping by. All parts to hearts!
Rolland Avatar
December 17, 2024 at 3:30 PM
a lovely poem, full of creativity, enjoyed yann
Lillico  Avatar
December 17, 2024 at 3:41 PM
Thank you Yann.
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