Holes I Have Fallen To

(07/11/2011)

How my life got this bitter
Only one can be blamed on
Everybody says I need to move on
Huh!-move on and hurt won’t go together

Inside too many holes I have fallen to
But never found which one called true
Once I was drunkenned in the hole of blue
By his deep stare and charismatic hue
I was sticked on him, one-so-called love was the glue
Then on my heart, he nailed a trace
Bleeded to struggle, I climbed off the hole
Yet, still I believed of love itself was grace
I could only pray of better love for my soul

Another time, I fell into twilight colored hole
Inside was a man full of intrigues
He made me feel I was a whole,
Before my fragile heart inflicted by his conflicts
He pushed me away off the cliff
My heart was getting stiffer
I cried inside, he shooed me to leave
He loved me, not as much as to his liquor

The third, fourth, fifth and so on
Never led me to pure heart to open
Tempted by false lusts always happened
How can I get to be this bad?
Blinded heart is a high way to that

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/22/2011 10:00:00 PM
Blinded heart is a high way to your predicament. Very good conclusive sentence. You really portray that in your poem, Dinda.
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Date: 12/14/2011 9:10:00 PM
Thanx for your inspiring words at my pages.
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Date: 12/14/2011 9:09:00 PM
An emotional write here Dinda.Nice feelings expressed.
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Date: 12/13/2011 6:42:00 AM
very powerful ending! and i have to say, this is one of the smoothest poems i have read by you. it really has a nice flow to it. i love it!
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Date: 12/10/2011 2:25:00 PM
How did this all happen to my sweet girl? Men can be so unfeeling and I've had my share of them. We need desensitizing for sure my dear. You need to be appreciated! Luv, Elizabeth
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Date: 12/9/2011 9:21:00 PM
so true, 'move on and hurt won't go together'... I don't think it's because one is bad the reason, encounters are simply meant to be. May a better love comes your way, dear poet. let that be a prayer we shared. thanks for stopping by and your kind comment.
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Date: 12/8/2011 1:42:00 PM
You need to find someone like yourself who has beauty on the inside as well.Don't worry they will come along.Perhaps you need to look in a different place. :o) You have alot of heart in this write.
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