Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Verse

Hole of a Doughnut

On the hole of the doughnut 
There is emptiness and blank
outside the hole 
a thrill of tastebuds Ferris wheel

topped with chocolate bits
or sprinkled with crunchy nuts
and soft fluffy marshmallows
Of which one lips samples
and sometimes lick
then bit by bit, bites 
swallows whole

the hole of the doughnut waits
For someones' finger
 to do the fill
Or maybe
 give it a little feel
Either roughness 
or softness
or it's bittersweet taste

So thus, 
a person's borrowed life
Isn't it?

by: olive_eloi
5:36pm
revised: May 18, 2014

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James Fraser November 24, 2014 at 12:03 PM A Jam doughnut and a coffee, care to join me Olive? - James :Pxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 27, 2014 at 2:57 AM someday someday.. :) ill join you.. :D

Poet Destroyer A July 18, 2014 at 2:59 PM Once again, thank you for the sweet reply...PD

Casarah Nance June 26, 2014 at 7:02 PM Oh girl you have made me so hungry!!! I can see you writing this while eating a doughnut, contemplating it's existence. Hey Grats on your win chicky! Well done! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 21, 2014 at 9:28 AM hahhaa yes.. :D so this came out Cassie.. :D!!! thanks much sorry for this late reply.. :D

Greg Hoffman June 26, 2014 at 4:47 PM Congrats on the win with a very tasty poem Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 21, 2014 at 9:27 AM thanks much greg.. :)

Arlene Smith June 26, 2014 at 8:07 AM Olive, congrats on a great win with this well thought out comparison... Well done!... Hugs.. Arlene Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 26, 2014 at 11:19 AM thank you Arlene..:) GBU

Paul Callus June 26, 2014 at 7:47 AM Congratulations Olive_eloi!!! I keep on praising your originality of thought; that humble doughnut hole too has served you well with the message passed. Thus..a fitting ending! // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 26, 2014 at 11:18 AM Thank you Paul..:) am glad you like it as I am when I write this one..:) now you know why sometimes I like doughnuts..:)

Pandita Sietesantos June 26, 2014 at 6:56 AM Hi Olive, love the great imagery - just a beautiful write and deserving of the great win! Congratulations, my friend on your superb win! I need to go grab a doughnut with a glass of milk - thanks for making me hungry:-) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 27, 2014 at 2:55 AM thank you so much Pandita.. :) God bless us all.. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta June 26, 2014 at 1:25 AM Enjoyed the poem with the morning cup of tea. Congrats on the win Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 26, 2014 at 11:07 AM Thank you Sir..:) GBU

Poet Destroyer A June 25, 2014 at 11:31 PM Oi, You must be so awesome, my son and I judged this contest.. Olive, . Congratulations:) Enjoyed every winning poem, on my list. Thanks for the support. If you like, stop by my latest blog "Poetic symphony" ....LOVE ~LINDA Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 26, 2014 at 6:35 AM Thank you Linda.. :) I appreciate the place.. :)

Michael Byte January 16, 2014 at 5:31 AM Very deep and another one for people to ponder on my friend. I interpret it talking about how one fills the inside of them with God or of the world. You are doing good my friend your soup friend Michael Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 16, 2014 at 2:53 PM yes, you got the right interpretation on it.. that was actually what am thinking about when i wrote it.. :) As nowadays in the situation I am in, Having the presence of GOD within my life is truly one great joy and truly makes me see that i need to stand still and lift all to him :)