Holding You In a Dance

holding you in a dance
the side-by-side stroll
raising my arm is your cue
begins the whirlwind
a whisper crosses the floor
you turn into me
my hand slides to the hips
fold arm into mine
bringing in the warmth
cheek to cheek, lips to ear
i adore you
now the gentle separation
my arm reaches into the heavens
hers in hand as my other lowers
begins the magic in her pirouette
as she turns her hair rushes
shoulder to shoulder
i am spellbound in the wave
the foam appears receding, revealing
the ivory neck of the Venus i so adore
the ear comes into full view
where so often i hover 
a butterfly caught in the magic
acquiring drams in a captivating meadow
moments spent in endearment
as that cheek-nose comes into view
i see Greek sculptors lost in a daydream
where chisel and stone await in reverence
as my hand pulls your hip in
lips in a simper, a delicious temptation
but not enough to deter our eyes embracing
as hysteria succumbs to ecstasy
our cheeks glide into one another
i am in a moment with her ear
i missed you
this is how my world turns
in the heavens we are

   OKC   12/22
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Buehler Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 9:26 AM
The beauty of this dance captivates and delights, Timothy. :)
Ashley Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 7:46 PM
Dear Timothy, the immediate intimacy and beauty of your poem takes my breath away as my heart is held in your dance. Exquisite, emotional, euphoric! Let the music play and may the dance never end. Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
Kendrick Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 1:43 PM
Passionate lines penned in this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. I wonder what dance that was and what was the music. Sara
DiMino Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 9:24 PM
Wonderfully romantic, Tim; the mingling of motion with music, bodies gliding together, supporting one another -- Lovely poetry throughout!
Ray Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 10:02 AM
thanks Joe
Eslinger Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 7:07 PM
Timothy! You’ve sent a freshness to love poetry here. PLEASE go to Youtube to see Elevation Worship Music song, “Dancing” from their CD “Lion”. You will not regret the effort! As you likely know, i seriously studied ballet & have also written love/dancing poems about me & my Jim. Real joining, mind dancing. Bravo! New Year hugs of thanks! sally
Ray Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 10:25 AM
i fail to see worship music as couples dancing....as far as attending churches i lead a solitary life of the eremite....it is a good song indeed....such gladness you and Jim live in dance and writing is truly a blessing....it will pay in great dividends
Horsman Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 12:37 AM
Love your vision while dancing, Timothy.
Ray Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 12:50 PM
thank you harry....it is such a blessing we poets have....at this stage where we ache in all the places we used to play.....we have the moments in memory where we relive the magic in it all....
George Avatar
January 3, 2023 at 7:33 PM
"as that cheek-nose comes into view i see Greek sculptors lost in a daydream where chisel and stone await in reverence".... Wonderful lines! This is such a spirited waltzing, so romantic. Its ardor is incomparable. Some lines secrete ecstasy! Kudos...
Ray Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 12:47 PM
thank you Valsa.....
Sangster - K Avatar
January 3, 2023 at 7:17 PM
A beautiful romantic poem Timothy. I enjoyed reading this :-)
Rhymer Avatar
January 3, 2023 at 4:44 PM
Lost in the moment.Delicious.
Ray Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 12:52 PM
thank you Vickey
Rose  Avatar
January 3, 2023 at 12:33 PM
only in the heavens can the stars couple and share the light, this is brilliantly written, poetic and beautiful, thank you for sharing
Ray Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 12:51 PM
thank you Rose....see harry's response
Suresh Avatar
January 3, 2023 at 9:07 AM
This is so beautiful, Tim. Thank you for sharing.
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