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Holding On To the Lei

the garland braved the ocean’s crested might a narrow surfboard bobbed in and out of sight exotic waves welcomed currents and its spray a feast of skill and courage at Waimea Bay I tried it once but could not go the distance fell off and had to swim despite my insistence I looked towards land ahead and checked behind hoped that strength stamina and luck were kind gulped water from above and sand down beneath surrendered prayed and touched the sacred wreath a dolphin waved her fin and gave me a kind ride the moral of the tale is you must check the tide 15th November 2020 This is a true story Lay November Contest Sponsor William Kekaula Checked with Rhyme Zone

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Date: 12/9/2020 2:09:00 PM
Creative way to go for the contest. All climates face November. Congrats on your winner. Sara
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Date: 12/2/2020 6:10:00 PM
Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, Kai (forgive my misjudgment of the rules: 'aabbcc, aabbcc...' and not 'aabbcc, ddeeff...'), my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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