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Holding On (Edited Version)

(Verse 1) Lying on my back Staring at the ceiling My head is starting to spin I’m grasping for air (Bridge) There’s a sharp pain in my stomach Voices in my head getting louder Everything done seems like its been in vain Face without a smile since I don’t know when (Hook) I’m reaching my hands out into the air Hoping somebody will help me Sending my sos I’m holding on (Verse 2) Trying to get a message out Wont somebody hear me My hands are becoming numb Feeling so light headed (Bridge) Feels like I’m falling Hanging on to a thin thread Clouds are moving so fast Wind is blowing strong (Hook) I’m reaching my hands out into the air Hoping somebody will help me Sending my sos I’m holding on **Needs more work***

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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