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Holding Close

By Michael J Falotico gliding velvet hips eyelashes dance to a heartbeat your vision holds me tempting fruit in reach two bodies so close mouthwatering taste drips slow drift away in the same dream a meal and dessert awake and tangled

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 4/29/2011 1:36:00 AM

7 rate, sir! ~JSLambert

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/25/2011 11:42:00 AM

How do you do you it?.. I must ask... again... your Michale Style of words never seem to run out... When i think you have the perfect lines I have never heard in other poems... I read another poem .. and sure enough you keep topping the top of the top... always with your Michael Style... dont stop... always p.d.

Judy Konos

Date: 4/22/2011 10:30:00 AM

and if you just read the first line in each one...wow wow wow....

Tara Jennings

Date: 4/18/2011 1:32:00 AM

yum now i want the cigarrette

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/16/2011 8:07:00 AM

Hmmm, Mr. Smooth hehe.. just kidding Michael, I love this one, but you know I would.. awesome of you to dedicate this to the ladies of the Soup ;) Love Wilma

Qui Bee

Date: 4/15/2011 9:23:00 AM

Aha, the ladies man! Enjoyed the poems very much.

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/15/2011 8:02:00 AM

Smooth as silk.....you are melting hearts with this one!! Oh Michael....you may be stalked after this...better be careful !! :)

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/15/2011 4:09:00 AM

Well you've definately got me Michael. These are awesome.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/14/2011 9:18:00 PM

well you definitely got sweet & romantic in your blood, Michael- this sure is a very lovely tribute to the ladies of the Soup-- thanks for bringing smiles to us :D ^_^ & sending you soupmail, you know I got your back ;)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/14/2011 6:09:00 PM

Nice write on the lovely ladies, Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/14/2011 5:39:00 PM

Mesmerizing and enchanting lines of Senryu so appreciate my W.K. of P.S. .. delicious adjectives and delightful imagery .. thankxx for honoring the ladies of Soup so sweetly.. Jersey Girl in thankful mode .. always and forever luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2011 5:23:00 PM

wow, Michael, what a great tribute for all the ladies, as you said in your blog just now. A very sensual write with awesome imagery! Luv, Andrea

Constance La France

Date: 4/14/2011 4:04:00 PM

awake and tangled, hot~~

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/14/2011 3:54:00 PM

lovely, very sensuous piece Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/14/2011 3:21:00 PM

You make my heart sing Michael among other things. Oh my did I say that. Well darn it's the truth. You are a sweetie Michael. Love, Carol P.S Loved your senryu's

Kash Poet

Date: 4/14/2011 3:13:00 PM

Enjoyed!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/14/2011 2:38:00 PM

now, i would like to be on the top 10 of soup women even if it's just for this subtly sensuous, breathtaking pice, michael.. you spoil us so! just radiabt.:) huggs, nette

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/14/2011 2:29:00 PM

Ah, Michael, if only all the lovely ladies here could have someone as romantic and appreciative as you! It's been a long time, but this poem took me back to some very passionate moments. Thank you! Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/14/2011 2:23:00 PM

A group of Spring Senyru's for all the lovely ladies of Poetry Soup...love Michael