Michael J. Falotico Poet Senryu

Holding Close

By Michael J Falotico

                                              gliding velvet hips
                                    eyelashes dance to a heartbeat
                                           your vision holds me

          tempting fruit in reach                                two bodies so close
    mouthwatering taste drips slow                 drift away in the same dream
            a meal and dessert                                    awake and tangled

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Jslambert Mister Roboto April 29, 2011 at 1:36 AM 7 rate, sir! ~JSLambert

Poet Destroyer A April 25, 2011 at 11:42 AM How do you do you it?.. I must ask... again... your Michale Style of words never seem to run out... When i think you have the perfect lines I have never heard in other poems... I read another poem .. and sure enough you keep topping the top of the top... always with your Michael Style... dont stop... always p.d.

Judy Konos April 22, 2011 at 10:30 AM and if you just read the first line in each one...wow wow wow....

Tara Jennings April 18, 2011 at 1:32 AM yum now i want the cigarrette

Wilma Neels April 16, 2011 at 8:07 AM Hmmm, Mr. Smooth hehe.. just kidding Michael, I love this one, but you know I would.. awesome of you to dedicate this to the ladies of the Soup ;) Love Wilma

Qui Bee April 15, 2011 at 9:23 AM Aha, the ladies man! Enjoyed the poems very much.

Carrie Richards April 15, 2011 at 8:02 AM Smooth as silk.....you are melting hearts with this one!! Oh Michael....you may be stalked after this...better be careful !! :)

Tahera Mannan April 15, 2011 at 4:09 AM Well you've definately got me Michael. These are awesome.

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 14, 2011 at 9:18 PM well you definitely got sweet & romantic in your blood, Michael- this sure is a very lovely tribute to the ladies of the Soup-- thanks for bringing smiles to us :D ^_^ & sending you soupmail, you know I got your back ;)

Dr.Ram Mehta April 14, 2011 at 6:09 PM Nice write on the lovely ladies, Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 14, 2011 at 5:39 PM Mesmerizing and enchanting lines of Senryu so appreciate my W.K. of P.S. .. delicious adjectives and delightful imagery .. thankxx for honoring the ladies of Soup so sweetly.. Jersey Girl in thankful mode .. always and forever luv..

Andrea Dietrich April 14, 2011 at 5:23 PM wow, Michael, what a great tribute for all the ladies, as you said in your blog just now. A very sensual write with awesome imagery! Luv, Andrea

Constance La France April 14, 2011 at 4:04 PM awake and tangled, hot~~

Francine Roberts April 14, 2011 at 3:54 PM lovely, very sensuous piece Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown April 14, 2011 at 3:21 PM You make my heart sing Michael among other things. Oh my did I say that. Well darn it's the truth. You are a sweetie Michael. Love, Carol P.S Loved your senryu's

Kash Poet April 14, 2011 at 3:13 PM Enjoyed!!

Nette Onclaud April 14, 2011 at 2:38 PM now, i would like to be on the top 10 of soup women even if it's just for this subtly sensuous, breathtaking pice, michael.. you spoil us so! just radiabt.:) huggs, nette

Carolyn Devonshire April 14, 2011 at 2:29 PM Ah, Michael, if only all the lovely ladies here could have someone as romantic and appreciative as you! It's been a long time, but this poem took me back to some very passionate moments. Thank you! Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico April 14, 2011 at 2:23 PM A group of Spring Senyru's for all the lovely ladies of Poetry Soup...love Michael