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Holding Back Tears

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you raped my soul with just one word and left behind a big black hole I was consumed with fast revenge with just one word you raped my soul your planet girl from sixty nine raided in the dark of night while stars blinked hard then fast from sixty nine, your planet girl you fast ignored my age my youth and trampled on my private room sledgehammered, old, and fraught my age my youth, you fast ignored I did not shed a single tear dry boned and tired too a stone replaced my tender heart a single tear, I did not shed. Aug. 13, 2021 For Edward Ibeh's This Or That, Vol 5 Poetry Contest Title chosen: Holding Back Tears

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 8/20/2021 8:37:00 AM

A gut-wrenching, amazing piece, Mystic! Congratulations on your winning my contest!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/14/2021 8:43:00 PM

So powerful, what a painful experience, it can turn a heart to stone, reads like a contender to me~

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/14/2021 6:40:00 AM

WOW. So sad and profound. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 8/14/2021 5:12:00 AM

"a stone replaced my tender heart/ a single tear, I did not shed" - these lines moved me - if not the same, I felt this same emotion at some point in my youth. I wrote a similar poem in my home-language - your feelings are shared. Love and hugs ~ Mala