Holding Back Tears

you raped my soul with just one word                                
and left behind a big black hole  
I was consumed with fast revenge 
with just one word you raped my soul 


your planet girl from sixty nine        
raided in the dark of night    
while stars blinked hard then fast       
from sixty nine, your planet girl    
  
you fast ignored my age my youth 
and trampled on my private room    
sledgehammered, old, and fraught 
my age my youth, you fast ignored   

I did not shed a single tear    
dry boned and tired too   
a stone replaced my tender heart  
a single tear, I did not shed.     


Aug. 13, 2021 
For Edward Ibeh's This Or That, Vol 5 Poetry Contest
Title chosen: Holding Back Tears
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Ibeh Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 8:37 AM
A gut-wrenching, amazing piece, Mystic! Congratulations on your winning my contest!
Faulkner Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 8:43 PM
So powerful, what a painful experience, it can turn a heart to stone, reads like a contender to me~
Mcintosh Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 6:40 AM
WOW. So sad and profound. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 5:12 AM
"a stone replaced my tender heart/ a single tear, I did not shed" - these lines moved me - if not the same, I felt this same emotion at some point in my youth. I wrote a similar poem in my home-language - your feelings are shared. Love and hugs ~ Mala
Evans Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 12:30 PM
I feel you for my heart turned into a stone with so many circumstances... So genuinely expressed...
Rose  Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 3:08 PM
Thank you Marilene
Buhagiar Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 9:12 AM
Horrible act that turns a heart into stone. Great emotions. Hugs. xx
Rose  Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 3:08 PM
Thank you Victor
Skelly Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 6:25 AM
Strong emotive write that jumps from the page...very nice indeed....Delice
Rose  Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 3:08 PM
Thank you Delice
Pandit Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 5:49 AM
When heart becomes stone--very emotive write, Vienna.
Rose  Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 3:08 PM
Thank you Vijay
Poet Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 5:16 AM
Great quatrain Rose, you penned much fine imagery too. My very best wishes for the contest.
Rose  Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 3:08 PM
Thank you Lasaad
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