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Holding Back Tears

you raped my soul with just one word and left behind a big black hole I was consumed with fast revenge with just one word you raped my soul your planet girl from sixty nine raided in the dark of night while stars blinked hard then fast from sixty nine, your planet girl you fast ignored my age my youth and trampled on my private room sledgehammered, old, and fraught my age my youth, you fast ignored I did not shed a single tear dry boned and tired too a stone replaced my tender heart a single tear, I did not shed. Aug. 13, 2021 For Edward Ibeh's This Or That, Vol 5 Poetry Contest Title chosen: Holding Back Tears

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Date: 8/20/2021 8:37:00 AM
A gut-wrenching, amazing piece, Mystic! Congratulations on your winning my contest!
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Date: 8/14/2021 8:43:00 PM
So powerful, what a painful experience, it can turn a heart to stone, reads like a contender to me~
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Date: 8/14/2021 6:40:00 AM
WOW. So sad and profound. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
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Date: 8/14/2021 5:12:00 AM
"a stone replaced my tender heart/ a single tear, I did not shed" - these lines moved me - if not the same, I felt this same emotion at some point in my youth. I wrote a similar poem in my home-language - your feelings are shared. Love and hugs ~ Mala
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Date: 8/13/2021 12:30:00 PM
I feel you for my heart turned into a stone with so many circumstances... So genuinely expressed...
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Date: 8/13/2021 3:08:00 PM
Thank you Marilene
Date: 8/13/2021 9:12:00 AM
Horrible act that turns a heart into stone. Great emotions. Hugs. xx
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Date: 8/13/2021 3:08:00 PM
Thank you Victor
Date: 8/13/2021 6:25:00 AM
Strong emotive write that jumps from the page...very nice indeed....Delice
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Date: 8/13/2021 3:08:00 PM
Thank you Delice
Date: 8/13/2021 5:49:00 AM
When heart becomes stone--very emotive write, Vienna.
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Date: 8/13/2021 3:08:00 PM
Thank you Vijay
Date: 8/13/2021 5:16:00 AM
Great quatrain Rose, you penned much fine imagery too. My very best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 8/13/2021 3:08:00 PM
Thank you Lasaad

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