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Hold Up the Sky

You’re the magic that holds up the stars in the sky, the brilliance of my muse without fear nor regret. You are my absolute best, and they all ask me why, “for you have given me a marriage I shan’t forget.” If I perished today I wouldn’t die full of pain’s fret- You came to me when I didn't know how to fly. You’re the love that the sky holds up in this life. For we are the fairytale the whole world envies. I am so glad to be your loyal and adoring wife, I can feel your heartbeat as I fall onto my knees. I sense your love through the wind in the trees- You came to me when anguish cut like a knife. You’re the fire the sky holds up for the moonbeams, for our nocturnal passion brings me such pleasure. I used to embrace this kind of love in my dreams, you know…the kind that carries on without measure. You are my one and only lucky golden treasure- You came to me when my life was tearing at its seams. You’re the magic that holds up the stars in the sky, like a magnet with gravitation force devoid of fear. Sharing a rare bond, and people always ask me why… “for I am complete whenever you, my love, are near”. I chose: "Hold Up the Sky" Edward Ibeh March 11, 2019 Pick a Title- Volume 2- Rhyme Poetry Contest

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Date: 4/1/2019 12:10:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to your mate Luloo. Congratulations on your deserving placement! : ) xxoo
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Date: 4/10/2019 5:16:00 AM
many thanks sweet Connie :) -luloo
Date: 3/24/2019 6:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved 2nd place win in my contest, Lu:-)
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Date: 4/10/2019 5:16:00 AM
thank you so much I am honored. :) -luloo
Date: 3/11/2019 5:04:00 PM
Lu, this is so beautifully penned, I loved your lines, this is a winner to me already ~
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/12/2019 7:44:00 AM
many thanks sweet Dear Heart :)-luloo
Date: 3/11/2019 2:01:00 PM
Hello Lu,Loo, it sounds like you have a very good marriage. Have a nice day my friend.
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/12/2019 7:43:00 AM
thank you sweet Darlene! :)-luloo
Date: 3/11/2019 10:02:00 AM
So beautiful! I made "F" in marriage, so this one brought me close to tears.
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/11/2019 12:43:00 PM
Aww thank you dear Sunlite...:)-luloo

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