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Hold Out Your Hand

Now as I hold you Here in my memories Lost in all the times we've shared together Once when forever Held dreams we treasured Dreams, that through time we would build together You are my one love Hearts beat as one love Now as i wait to feel your hand in mine and Wait for me there love Hold out your hand love Alas, I'll take your hand in mine As I lay here and life no longer holds me tight I wait for you to come And guide me there to where you are so we can dance among the moon and stars, then (Bridge) Gently I'll kiss you Darling I've missed you Longing to hold you in my arms again, as Thoughts of you fill me Your spirit lives through me You took my heart when you went away Now as I hold you Here in my memories Lost in all the times we've shared together I hear you whisper Softly you call me Yearning, to feel your arms around me You are my one love First and my last love Now, as I wait to feel your hand in mine and Wait for me there love Hold out your hand love A breath ... and I'll take your hand in mine As I lay here and life no longer holds me tight I wait for you to come And guide me there to where you are so we can dance among the moon and stars (Bridge) Now as I'm slipping Life inside me fading Knowing your spirit's here beside me darling I feel your hand love Your kiss on my lips love At last ... you wipe my tears away .... away (softly) ______________________________________________ February 11, 2018 Written for "Fun With Lyrics" Contest Sponsor: Craig Cornish To be sung to the tune of "Chance Encounter" by Kevin Kern

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Date: 4/15/2018 7:55:00 PM
Judith, I love it. Pitch it to LA & N'ville. Just a suggestion Maybe change the title to...Now As I Hold You. Very very good song lyric!
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Date: 2/22/2018 9:57:00 AM
Such a beautiful love song to go with the music, Judy! congratulations on your 2nd Place podium win! Sandra
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Date: 2/27/2018 11:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Sandra for your very kind comments and visit :) ~ Judy
Date: 2/18/2018 5:34:00 PM
Wasn't this music wonderful, and I can see you found it just as inspiring to write for! What a lovely poem you created Judith! Well done !!
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Date: 2/20/2018 11:15:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comments Carrie! Best, Judy
Date: 2/18/2018 10:09:00 AM
This is gorgeous, Judy, and so deserving of the win ... congrats and blessings, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 2/18/2018 12:26:00 PM
Thank you so much Greg! :) ~Judy
Date: 2/17/2018 10:24:00 PM
Beautifully done Judith, congratulations. Tom
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Date: 2/18/2018 12:26:00 PM
Thank you so much Tom!! ~Judy
Date: 2/17/2018 3:32:00 PM
Wow, what a pro. Marvelous lyrics, Judith.
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Date: 2/18/2018 12:25:00 PM
Thank you so much Line :) ~Judy
Date: 2/17/2018 3:07:00 PM
This is how lyrics are supposed to be done. Almost like you've been doing this forever (not easy). A truly wonderful love song.
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Date: 2/18/2018 12:24:00 PM
Thank you so much for this honor Craig!! Your comments are so very encouraging and appreciated. I have not written lyrics .. but I do play piano ... so downloaded this piano music to help me to create the lyrics. This was a very fun contest!! ~Judy
Date: 2/12/2018 1:48:00 PM
This is very well done, I'm so impressed by those who can write lyrics such as this, it's something that alludes me...good luck with Craig's contest
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Date: 2/13/2018 2:00:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments Frederic! ~Judy
Date: 2/12/2018 9:53:00 AM
Judy, this is so intensely sad and beautiful, How very romantic, the strength of love is amazing Good Luck xxoo
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Date: 2/13/2018 1:59:00 PM
Thank you so much Mike. You definitely got the feeling I was trying to write :) ~Judy
Date: 2/12/2018 8:04:00 AM
Nice lyrics, do not know that song, but will look it up.. good luck in the contest..
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Date: 2/13/2018 1:58:00 PM
Thank you Silent One :)
Date: 2/12/2018 3:08:00 AM
- A beautiful poem / song that touches my heart ... gorgeous, Judy :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/13/2018 1:58:00 PM
Thank you my friend Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/11/2018 9:19:00 PM
Lovely depiction of love and longing. Your lyrics shine with yearning for a loved one..best for this difficult contest..you know music and lyrics well, Judy.
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Date: 2/13/2018 1:57:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay :)
Date: 2/11/2018 7:30:00 PM
wow, this is such a sad and beautiful read Judy, i love it, i like ur writes. :)
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Date: 2/13/2018 1:56:00 PM
Thank you Lewis :)