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Hold On To Prized Ways

As people start to age wisdom gains an edge Regrets wish to reassess to honor old pledge Memories once sour, clamor to turn a page Wisdom gains an edge as people start to age Truth that once was remains the guiding light Stars that twinkled then still sparkle bright Departures from veracity mount a bold pause Remains the guiding light, truth that once was Past manifests anew when future looks bleak Reminiscing old revelry when grief tries to peek Cherishing pleasant thoughts wishing to renew When future looks bleak, past manifests anew Hold on to prized ways when life gives a test Conquests aren't easy when aiming for the best Doctrines beholding virtue are worthy of praise When life give a test, hold on to prized ways July 16, 2018 NOTE: This poem is a Swap Quatrain.

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Date: 5/9/2022 5:12:00 AM
Though aging is not pleasant, it is not to be abhorred . Aging has its merits. With age, comes wisdom. Past experiences becomes one's guiding light in old age ! Wisely and beautifully articulated. Vijay and I appreciate your sagacity and maturity !
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Date: 12/11/2018 4:35:00 AM
Amazing poem!! Definitely well-written and a masterpiece times a million:) -JWE
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Date: 10/25/2018 9:54:00 AM
Hi Vijay, I had never heard of this form until now. Another excellent write you lay before us. The wisdom shines through the words. With age, comes wisdom. The message is so clear my friend. A wonderful write. Have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 10/11/2018 6:16:00 PM
A well written, wise poem. Put together so nice :)
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Date: 7/27/2018 8:32:00 PM
wow, it's so cool that you did it swap quatrain style. I did not even realize at first that you were doing it, but it seemed so familar to me what you were doing. SAGE poetry!!
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Date: 7/19/2018 5:48:00 AM
True.Aging is really a blessing.Like it.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/20/2018 5:03:00 PM
Thank you Akham.
Date: 7/18/2018 4:13:00 PM
No substitute for experience Vijay, well done...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/20/2018 5:03:00 PM
Thank you Charlie.
Date: 7/18/2018 1:49:00 PM
You are right and many will feel like this.. another great swap quatrain...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/20/2018 5:03:00 PM
Thank you Silent One.
Date: 7/18/2018 8:02:00 AM
Wow! I LOVE this wonderful poem--so well-done, Vijay! a favorite! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/20/2018 5:03:00 PM
Thank you Janice.
Date: 7/17/2018 2:22:00 PM
such an uplifting poem which embodies blessings of aging, vijay... incredible lines!... huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/17/2018 2:59:00 PM
Thank you nette..appreciate the feedback.
Date: 7/17/2018 1:56:00 PM
Yes, you've depicted aging quite well with this one. It's just a shame that we can't have the wisdom when we're young...we'd make a lot less mistakes in our lives.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/17/2018 2:59:00 PM
Thank you MLK..appreciate your feedback.
Date: 7/17/2018 12:13:00 PM
I really enjoyed the form,. Vijay and the message is an important one. So very well done !!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/17/2018 1:32:00 PM
Thank you Mike.
Date: 7/17/2018 10:17:00 AM
This is excellent in form, delivery and content. well done, Emile.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/17/2018 1:32:00 PM
Thank you Emile..appreciate the visit and kind feedback.
Date: 7/17/2018 8:53:00 AM
Yes life is testing me right now, and yes I will hang on to virtue and Faith, dearer to me then anything this world has to offer Vijay, Thanks for sharing. And thank you for being present in my life. Your a constant, and I like that, I don't have much of that round me
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/17/2018 1:31:00 PM
Hang in there friend..faith and virtue are dear friends to guide us. I appreciate your sentiments..many thanks, Pixie.
Date: 7/17/2018 7:29:00 AM
Vijay: As always your words do ring true. An interesting form to try and shifting the lines really emphasizes their meaning. SuZ
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/17/2018 1:28:00 PM
Thank you SuZ..enjoyed reading your comments.
Date: 7/17/2018 3:21:00 AM
Knowledge gained through experience and learning helps one re-evaluate his life's ways so as to keep shus what is worthy and of value! An outstanding witty writing that delights the mind of those who understand its depth my friend, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/17/2018 7:30:00 AM
Thank you my friend your valuable insight on the theme..many thanks as always..appreciate your comments.
Date: 7/16/2018 5:26:00 PM
Wonderful form of poetry, and just love how you enhanced the whole thing with your awesome words.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/17/2018 7:28:00 AM
Thank you Harry...appreciate your comments.
Date: 7/16/2018 4:02:00 PM
So true Vijay... There's no time to waste as we age...it's now or never...A nice write indeed...All the best my friend
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/17/2018 7:28:00 AM
Thank you Arturo...appreciate your feedback.
Date: 7/16/2018 2:45:00 PM
Aren't you the clever one! Well done indeed.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/17/2018 7:28:00 AM
Thank you Dale.

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