Hold My Hand

emotions begin to play
within one's body
sparkling 
in the fountains 
of life

power to generate
such a soft feeling
within the soul
you raise me up
in a beautiful wave
galloping unfurling

rolling it in front of you
the carpet red
in passion flows
upon an ocean
blue deep

i offer to you 
a ship 
to set sail
heading the distance
paradise island

wildest dreams
please jump aboard
my love
firstly take a sip
from one of
 the finest
of wines

let the journey begin
if only i could
take you
in a circle
around the world

docked underneath
a coconut tree
just to hold your hand
in the sweetest 
of dreams

touching fingers
feelings petal soft
to look into those eyes
melting upon the embers
moves emotions
within my soul
you dance 
with butterflies

one can see
an ocean swelling
bursting forth
with me dropping
plus you
head over heels
hand in hand 
we will walk 
the path 
to paradise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mbamalu Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 10:36 AM
...yah...let the journey begin...here we go!...nice one...pow and thumbs.
Mcdaid Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 7:13 PM
THANK YOU EVER SO MUCH FOR THE WONDERFUL COMMENT COLLETTE DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Fiery Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 9:21 AM
Such a beautiful write Liam..! You have written this with so much feelings. ..hope u achieve everything in life...cheers!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 7:12 PM
THANK YOU DEARLY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Carroll Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 5:49 AM
Hey Liam, Wonderful write from you my friend.. Ken
Mcdaid Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 5:49 AM
THANK YOU MY DEAR FRIEND HAVE A BEAUTY OF A DAY KEN DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Chircop Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 2:08 AM
to look into those eyes melting upon the embers within my soul..How passionate such verse mingles in this paradiso created by your fingertips..Wow
Mcdaid Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 11:05 AM
charmaine thank you my dearest friend a very beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated
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