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Written on May 10th, 2026 for The Empress of Ink's prompt Dramatize the Desires Poetry Contest.

Hold me in your Heart

The rain falls faster, faster now,
Plummeting arid plains below,
Eroding bits of blackened soil,
Washing away decayed petals.

One by one, they slip out of existence,
Walking out rusted doors.
I stand under the cold, crisp water,
Letting it soak through layers of frayed fabric,
Seeping into skin that's leathered with age.

Scents of petrichor shift through brisk bursts of wind,
Trapped within the mess of my mind for far too long now.
The resounding smells flood my senses
With bygone memories,
Snapping between past misunderstandings
That turned into reverberations of us,
And fears of a future
That slipped through calloused fingers.

Looking down at what materialized in my wailing hands,
I dig the frigid steel deep into my chest,
Cutting beneath layers of flesh and sinew,
Past a cracking ribcage,
To expose a beating heart, screaming in agony.

I slice it from its hollow home,
Position it on a tarnished platter,
Place it as an offering at your sacred feet,
Interminably holding me in your gnarled heart forthwith.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Miller Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 7:42 AM
Oh wow, dark and so delicious, congratulations
Jama Avatar
June 14, 2026 at 6:04 PM
Thank you so much.
Lane Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 8:43 AM
The pains we suffer from loves, lost and found. They go beyond what we inflict upon ourselves. Congratulations to on your winning write, Sara.
Jama Avatar
June 14, 2026 at 6:04 PM
Thank you very much.
Empress Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 4:36 AM
I can count on you always for a good gothic, dark, deeply moving poem that flows with such profound and poignant emotions Sara. Thank you for writing for my contest such a brilliant piece! The opening here caught my attention along with your use of the prompt in the ending, which is dramatic on a whole different level! Truly very unique and eloquent! I love every word woven here! Pleasure placing this first! Fave! Sending you light always
Jama Avatar
June 14, 2026 at 6:04 PM
Thank you for your continued support Ink.
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