Hold Me In Your Arms

Take me where our love once was
In our garden, on leisurely walks 
Flying mountains where birds flock
Holding hands in a heavenly talk.

Spinning rhythm around the clock
Rowing our love boat by the dock
Spellbound by your godly charms
Hold me forever in adoring arms.

Travel with me to world unseen
Where glaciers rise bluish green
To Top of Europe in Interlaken
A scenic climb closer to heaven.

Drive me around the Ring of Kerry
Ireland's famous circle of scenery
Let's renew vows in joy and glory
To celebrate wedding anniversary.

Embrace me under arc of rainbow
Hold me softly as moonlight glows
Kiss me like you have never before
Let hearts sing a melodious encore.

Stage a show love would espouse
Take me to Sydney Opera House
Write the lyrics to our life song
Bind our souls in joyous sing along.

Grab me closely in a willful pause
Hear the call of romantic applause
Let desire lure our love so strong
Allow me to gently fall in your arms.


September 15, 2017
Placed 2nd: Strand Pick J Contest by Brian Strand
Placed 3rd: Hold Me In Your Arms
Sponsor: Julie Rodeheaver
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Ashley Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 9:04 PM
Congratulations Vijay on your win with this fantastic poem.
Schiavina Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 10:37 AM
Congratulations!
Pandit Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 1:20 PM
Thank you Frances!
Roper Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 6:23 PM
Congratulations on your win, Vijay, so romantic Eve ~`*
Pandit Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 6:41 PM
Thanks Eve!
Webster Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 11:44 AM
Congratulations, Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 12:52 PM
Thank you Jack!
La France Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 11:13 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful!
Pandit Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 11:15 AM
Thank you BW!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 11:23 PM
Congratulations, Vijay on your win.
Pandit Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 6:44 AM
Thank you Subimal!
Webster Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 8:51 PM
Very idyllic, Vijay! Sure to be in top 3!
Pandit Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 6:43 AM
Thank you Jack!
One Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 10:32 AM
You are a master of rhyme...
Pandit Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 2:10 PM
Thank you Silent One--it means a lot coming from you!
Onclaud Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 4:05 PM
ohh, i am enthralled.. you didn't miss a beat, vijay!...huggs
Pandit Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 4:30 PM
Thanks nette--enjoyed reading your comments!
Gupta Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 12:22 PM
Very nice, Vijay ... Good luck with the contest ...
Pandit Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 12:50 PM
Thank you Probir!
Smith Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 10:36 AM
Very beautiful Vijay
Pandit Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 10:57 AM
Thanks Tim!
Sands Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 8:20 AM
What a great well written poem this is Vijay! So many wonderful lines. I like the spinning rhythm around the clock and rowing our love about by the dock! and you have ended this superbly too. Good luck in the contest! :)
Pandit Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 8:56 AM
Love your comments always--thank you for your visit and support Heidi!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 7:52 AM
A fave for me, my friend! Beautifully written romantic quatrain!
Pandit Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 8:07 AM
So delighted with your comments, Kim--many thanks for the visit!
Andresen Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 7:19 AM
- I love this romantic writing, Vijay - Beautiful and a pleasure to read - A winning poem in my eyes - GL! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 8:06 AM
You bring smile to everyone Anne-Lise--such fun to read your comments!
Sivey Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 6:05 AM
This is so beautiful, such a gorgeous write, filled with love and passion for your significant other! I surely loved reading your delightful poem this morning! What a heartfelt piece, Great Work!!
Pandit Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 6:44 AM
Thank you Russell--always love your delightful words and support!
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