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Hold Me In Your Arms

Take me where our love once was In our garden, on leisurely walks Flying mountains where birds flock Holding hands in a heavenly talk. Spinning rhythm around the clock Rowing our love boat by the dock Spellbound by your godly charms Hold me forever in adoring arms. Travel with me to world unseen Where glaciers rise bluish green To Top of Europe in Interlaken A scenic climb closer to heaven. Drive me around the Ring of Kerry Ireland's famous circle of scenery Let's renew vows in joy and glory To celebrate wedding anniversary. Embrace me under arc of rainbow Hold me softly as moonlight glows Kiss me like you have never before Let hearts sing a melodious encore. Stage a show love would espouse Take me to Sydney Opera House Write the lyrics to our life song Bind our souls in joyous sing along. Grab me closely in a willful pause Hear the call of romantic applause Let desire lure our love so strong Allow me to gently fall in your arms. September 15, 2017 Placed 2nd: Strand Pick J Contest by Brian Strand Placed 3rd: Hold Me In Your Arms Sponsor: Julie Rodeheaver

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Date: 10/23/2017 9:04:00 PM
Congratulations Vijay on your win with this fantastic poem.
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Date: 9/20/2017 10:37:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/20/2017 1:20:00 PM
Thank you Frances!
Date: 9/19/2017 6:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Vijay, so romantic Eve ~`*
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2017 6:41:00 PM
Thanks Eve!
Date: 9/19/2017 11:44:00 AM
Congratulations, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2017 12:52:00 PM
Thank you Jack!
Date: 9/19/2017 11:13:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2017 11:15:00 AM
Thank you BW!
Date: 9/18/2017 11:23:00 PM
Congratulations, Vijay on your win.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2017 6:44:00 AM
Thank you Subimal!
Date: 9/18/2017 8:51:00 PM
Very idyllic, Vijay! Sure to be in top 3!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2017 6:43:00 AM
Thank you Jack!
Date: 9/16/2017 10:32:00 AM
You are a master of rhyme...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/16/2017 2:10:00 PM
Thank you Silent One--it means a lot coming from you!
Date: 9/15/2017 4:05:00 PM
ohh, i am enthralled.. you didn't miss a beat, vijay!...huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/15/2017 4:30:00 PM
Thanks nette--enjoyed reading your comments!
Date: 9/15/2017 12:22:00 PM
Very nice, Vijay ... Good luck with the contest ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/15/2017 12:50:00 PM
Thank you Probir!
Date: 9/15/2017 10:36:00 AM
Very beautiful Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/15/2017 10:57:00 AM
Thanks Tim!
Date: 9/15/2017 8:20:00 AM
What a great well written poem this is Vijay! So many wonderful lines. I like the spinning rhythm around the clock and rowing our love about by the dock! and you have ended this superbly too. Good luck in the contest! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/15/2017 8:56:00 AM
Love your comments always--thank you for your visit and support Heidi!
Date: 9/15/2017 7:52:00 AM
A fave for me, my friend! Beautifully written romantic quatrain!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/15/2017 8:07:00 AM
So delighted with your comments, Kim--many thanks for the visit!
Date: 9/15/2017 7:19:00 AM
- I love this romantic writing, Vijay - Beautiful and a pleasure to read - A winning poem in my eyes - GL! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/15/2017 8:06:00 AM
You bring smile to everyone Anne-Lise--such fun to read your comments!
Date: 9/15/2017 6:05:00 AM
This is so beautiful, such a gorgeous write, filled with love and passion for your significant other! I surely loved reading your delightful poem this morning! What a heartfelt piece, Great Work!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/15/2017 6:44:00 AM
Thank you Russell--always love your delightful words and support!

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