Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

- Hold Me Close My Sweet -

Golden enchanting warm beautiful magic
falling behind mountains spell binding
A setting sun bows down relinquishing her throne 
paints glowing amber clouds faraway in a distant horizon dreams
She smiled while whispering the few very freeing words
while she ran deeper into her bright future

Darkening skies breathing daylights lastly sighs 
her last breath glistening gold dancing with the shadows 
rippling waves call out inside one thousand echoes 
Darkness slowly swallowing light silk satin ebony
The little lights knew it couldn't last
because evil drifts in
as the shadows of the past

Making way for the stars winking silver
Rocked gently side to side on a smiling moon
an eclipsing marriage
when the sun kisses the moon
golden silvery beautiful 
This is how we are going to be;
so holy, magic and so great
we carry experience
with the soul and heart to create




A co write written by Liam Mcdaid and 
  Anne-Lise Andresen :) - 02.01.2015 -
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Funom Makama January 28, 2015 at 8:18 AM Great lines with blessed words. Thanks for the magnificient share. I hope the new year is going well so far..

Funeka Matwasa January 18, 2015 at 2:43 PM Beautiful Anne-Lise Andresen January 18, 2015 at 2:45 PM - Thank you for the lovely comments and visit, Funeka :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock January 15, 2015 at 6:19 PM Beautiful and whimsical write from you two. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen January 16, 2015 at 4:26 AM - Thank you dear Phyllis, for the beautiful words and visit - Glad that you enjoy this poem from Liam and me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Salazar January 8, 2015 at 4:49 PM This is so beautiful and mesmerizing. Like a novel that you just hate to stop reading until you reach its climax. Very descriptive writing. I loved it. Anne-Lise Andresen January 9, 2015 at 2:19 AM - Michael, thank you for the beautiful words and visit - Glad that you enjoy this poem from Liam and me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak January 6, 2015 at 8:27 AM What a beautiful collaboration! The images are spellbinding. Love the line "rocked gently on a smiling moon" Anne-Lise Andresen January 6, 2015 at 8:31 AM - Thank you for the lovely comments and visit, dear Monterey :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman January 4, 2015 at 12:37 PM Anne-Lise, A great co-write indeed with Liam!! The result of your combined efforts is quite magical. The imagery is most enchanting. Best Always, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2015 at 1:31 PM - Dear Gary, thank you for the beautiful words and visit - Glad that you enjoy this poem from Liam and me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Debra Squyres January 4, 2015 at 10:48 AM Magical collaboration of two gifted poets !! Enjoyed this !! Thank you !! Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2015 at 11:08 AM - Thank you for the lovely comments and visit, dear Debra :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 4, 2015 at 3:13 AM Great write "when the sun kisses the moon" my fav . I have written many poems on this theme twenty years back not so old that time hahaha. God bless Anne-Lise>>love...Rajat Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2015 at 5:22 AM - Rajat, thank you for the beautiful words and visit - Glad that you enjoy this poem from Liam and me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lei Strauss January 3, 2015 at 8:18 PM How did you guys made this? Fantastic write! May you have a blissful new year... Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2015 at 5:20 AM - Lei, thank you for the beautiful words and visit - Glad that you enjoy this poem from Liam and me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser January 3, 2015 at 3:16 PM A beautiful write, indeed. So true that we, "we carry experience with the soul and heart to create". Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2015 at 5:19 AM - M.L. thank you for the beautiful words and visit - Glad that you enjoy this poem from Liam and me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper January 3, 2015 at 12:47 PM Anne-Lise & Liam, beautiful painting, as the black clouds get to swallow the warms of the sun. Very romantic, write. 7 Anne-Lise Andresen January 3, 2015 at 12:57 PM - Thank you for the beautiful words and visit dear Eve - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath January 3, 2015 at 11:19 AM "Exquisite beauty hidden in it floating with romantic rhythm. Lovely done my lovely friend. Nice collaboration. I feel 7 here. Loved always,bl" Anne-Lise Andresen January 3, 2015 at 11:47 AM - Thank you for the beautiful words and visit my friend Bl - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman January 3, 2015 at 11:08 AM wonderful collab, love the sincerity and it is truly a wondrous poem,,,Happy New Year to you both... Anne-Lise Andresen January 3, 2015 at 11:46 AM - Thank you for the beautiful words and visit, Harry - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian January 3, 2015 at 10:21 AM You two worked us up to an amazing climax of love and beauty. You write well together. Giving you both hugs. Anne-Lise Andresen January 3, 2015 at 10:55 AM - Thank you from both of us - Enjoyable with your visit, dear Eileen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick January 3, 2015 at 9:55 AM You two do good together..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen January 3, 2015 at 10:55 AM - Thank you from both of us - Enjoyable with your visit, dear Sara - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter January 3, 2015 at 5:58 AM Hello Liam & Anne Lise! This is a very beautiful and romantic poem. Excellent collaboration between you two as always! So full of love and romance, one to be held very close to ones heart, my dearest friends Liam and Anne-Lise. Just awesome !You're amazing poets! Great use of imagery!A solid 7 for each one of you! Your pens are truly golden! I wish you a very Happy New Year to each of you! Wish you both a wonderful day! God bless you! :) Love and hugs! xxoxxoxx D. Anne-Lise Andresen January 3, 2015 at 6:39 AM - Thank you for the beautiful words and visit dear Dorian - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis January 3, 2015 at 5:44 AM What a melody of words! What a phantasmagoria of colors! What a dream of a writing! A seven to each! God bless you both, dear Lim and Anne-Lise! Anne-Lise and Liam! Anne-Lise Andresen January 3, 2015 at 6:38 AM - Thank you for the beautiful words and visit dear Demetrios - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton January 3, 2015 at 1:40 AM great poem of romance and imagery AL and Liam hugs Anne-Lise Andresen January 3, 2015 at 5:40 AM - Thank you for the beautiful words and visit dear Shadow - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith January 2, 2015 at 10:06 PM A wonderfully penned collab....hugs Tim Anne-Lise Andresen January 3, 2015 at 5:40 AM - Thank you for the beautiful words and visit, my friend Tim - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi January 2, 2015 at 7:35 PM I enjoyed reading your work this evening. Light & Love Anne-Lise Andresen January 3, 2015 at 5:40 AM - Thank you for the beautiful words and visit dear Debbie - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich January 2, 2015 at 2:27 PM beautiful personification you two made together. How lovely! Anne-Lise Andresen January 3, 2015 at 5:39 AM - Thank you for the beautiful words and visit dear Andrea - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison January 2, 2015 at 1:36 PM you two truly have pens of gold - awesome imagery my friends - you two rock! a 7 and hugs jan xxx Anne-Lise Andresen January 2, 2015 at 2:14 PM - Thank you for the beautiful words and visit dear Jan - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid January 2, 2015 at 1:18 PM very beautifully drawn really anne lise your pen flowed golden in this such a pleasure thank you dear pal have a blessed beautiful weekend Anne-Lise Andresen January 2, 2015 at 2:13 PM - Always a pleasure my friend Liam :) - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)