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Ho Hoe Down Vassallo Style

Weeeeel, It's friday night And I got my fiddle Alfred's here And he starting to niggle I said call the dance And make those folks wiggle Here at the Soup hoe down He stood at the mike And started talkin' silly with a Do-se-do Just like a Hillbilly With an allemande left Hypocrites to the right Sashay now, well into the night Then He called a promenade With a roll away Cause He never made a poem That made Poem of the Day With a see-saw-taw And a circle to the line Freddie slip the clutch And said good-bye to the grind

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Date: 11/10/2015 12:30:00 PM
I Like Alfreds style. he's got a something awesome going on... Like reality on the soup:) SKAT
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Date: 10/24/2015 8:16:00 AM
I'm glad you found it, liked it, and never left the soup-take care my friend . Happy writing
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Date: 10/3/2014 9:07:00 PM
You are one naughty boy, but I love it. I agree with both you and Jan. I write because I am compelled to do so; if someone likes it, that's a bonus. I would rather have one good honest comment from one of the soup members than make poem of the day. Whoop ti doo!!
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Date: 10/3/2014 8:58:00 PM
I really do hope Freddie takes some time out and cools down and doesn't leave - he really is an incredibly talented poet. Does it really matter if we don't make poem of the day - no - what matters is we are writing and posting and being creative and more importantly having fun and making new friends from all over the world. Hugs jan xxx
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 10/3/2014 9:02:00 PM
I agree with you Jan, I hope he can see the humor in the way thing are, and really begin to write, not for the sake of approval, but for the joy of it.

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