Ho Hoe Down Vassallo Style

Weeeeel, It's friday night
And I got my fiddle 
Alfred's here 
And he starting to niggle
I said call the dance
And make those folks wiggle
Here at the Soup hoe down

He stood at the mike
And started talkin' silly
with a Do-se-do
Just like a Hillbilly
With an allemande left
Hypocrites to the right
Sashay now, well into the night

Then He called a promenade
With a roll away
Cause He never made a poem
That made Poem of the Day
With a see-saw-taw
And a circle to the line
Freddie slip the clutch
And said good-bye to the grind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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November 10, 2015 at 12:30 PM
I Like Alfreds style. he's got a something awesome going on... Like reality on the soup:) SKAT
Curtis Avatar
October 24, 2015 at 8:16 AM
I'm glad you found it, liked it, and never left the soup-take care my friend . Happy writing
Gibson Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 9:07 PM
You are one naughty boy, but I love it. I agree with both you and Jan. I write because I am compelled to do so; if someone likes it, that's a bonus. I would rather have one good honest comment from one of the soup members than make poem of the day. Whoop ti doo!!
Allison Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 8:58 PM
I really do hope Freddie takes some time out and cools down and doesn't leave - he really is an incredibly talented poet. Does it really matter if we don't make poem of the day - no - what matters is we are writing and posting and being creative and more importantly having fun and making new friends from all over the world. Hugs jan xxx
Curtis Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 9:02 PM
I agree with you Jan, I hope he can see the humor in the way thing are, and really begin to write, not for the sake of approval, but for the joy of it.
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