Hiz and Herz

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                    Whilst I flicked mine flesh
                               With mine
                       Frenetic duke's digits
                                lounging
                  'pon the beach's bright side
                          Mine I exclaimed
                        "it's sabulous here"
     
                                  Mine
                             petite pretty
                               exclaimed
                                  "yes
                               fantastical"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Onclaud Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 3:43 PM
fantastic verse so delightfully clever, james.. huggs
Dietrich Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 1:56 AM
I love her fantastical reply!
Oimbo Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 4:01 AM
I will have to sit down to read the poem. I like the art in it really
Andresen Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 8:47 AM
- A unique write ... well done, James - Hope all is well with you ... best wishes and hugs from Norway // Anne-Lise :)
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