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Hiya's Words

"There'll be a zealous zephyr that isn't tamed by time; I'll be the lunar princess, and the ship of faith shall sail, upon milky seas of my iris. Breathing stars, I'll devour the universe, being an empyrean saga of wisdom and sacrifice, that rules the world..." Copyright © Hiya Sharma | Year Posted 2024 "There will be beauty on the wind that can't be bought nor sold; I'll be the King of the Universe, and the canoe that glides you home, shall fill the deep blue seas of your soul. Breathing moons, that seize your heart, being an Empress of the Universe of Mercy and Grace, all of which, rules the world.. By Mystic Rose

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/13/2024 7:59:00 PM

Deliciously, delightfully exquisite! Love it! A fave. Evelyn

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 2/13/2024 8:47:00 AM

A beautiful tribute to poetess Hiya, a wonderful collaboration you’ve put together. Beryl

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/12/2024 9:09:00 AM

An exquisite dialogue between two of my favorite poets. Great collaboration.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/12/2024 11:36:00 AM

Thank you dear Victor.

Maria Williams

Date: 2/11/2024 6:05:00 PM

This is such a beautiful collaboration with dear Hiya and you, dearest Vie. You both complement each other splendidly. A fave for me...Hugs

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/12/2024 11:37:00 AM

Thank you dear friend :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/11/2024 3:18:00 PM

a sweet tribute to a gifted poetess whose poems are always enchanting, descriptive, and wise...a uniquely talented person. You're so thoughtful, Rose, to write this poem about her...have a splendid evening, Sara

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/11/2024 4:51:00 PM

where would we be without the encouragement of each other Sara :)

Dm Babbit

Date: 2/11/2024 6:49:00 AM

LOved the combo, for Queen and King.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/11/2024 12:01:00 PM

Thank you for reading DM, love your presence here

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/11/2024 6:38:00 AM

You are a kind heart, Vienna. Hiya deserves the accolades you convey through her poem, and so do you, my friend. Your thoughts resonate in this juxtaposition.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/11/2024 12:01:00 PM

She is an amazing poet Vijay, thanks for stopping by

Ink Empress

Date: 2/11/2024 6:37:00 AM

She is an angelic star dear sweet rose, so kind of you to write this and to post this here, she deserves nothing more than kindness and love such as the light you sprinkle cosmically over her grateful heart. She will love this and appreciate it, one who supports me sincerely, and has been there through my downs poetically too, when i lost my account on instagram especially, she was one of them that was loud and stood up for me, and did so much to bring it back. I am always so grateful for this

Ink Empress
Date: 2/11/2024 6:39:00 AM

Young girl, she is a princess, and you my dear sweet rose, you are a natural at showering us all with fragrant love, look at those lines youv written! Im in awe! “ I'll be the King of the Universe, and the canoe that glides you home, shall fill the deep blue seas of your soul. “ how sweet and soulfully touching and goes so well with her magnificent metaphors and alliterations! You are truly a blessing for us newbies, so welcoming and youv made us feel home on soup, forever grateful for you! A fave for this beauty

Hiya Sharma

Date: 2/11/2024 5:50:00 AM

Oh my, this made me tear up..You're just so sweet and inspiring dear Rose..Thank you so much for gifting me with beautiful words of kindness! Your words truly create a magical ambience and I also love how you've made it flow like a collaboration, uniting the King and the Queen..an artistic idea, gosh..You truly blessed my heart and filled my soul with so much gratitude for your mystical presence. These lines flow with resplendence "the canoe that glides you home" Your poem is like a paradise..

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/11/2024 12:00:00 PM

I couldn't resist lol, your words are so beautiful, it makes it easy to follow you :)

Hiya Sharma
Date: 2/11/2024 5:55:00 AM

What can be more rewarding to receive such a lovely honour, from a talented poetess like you! "There will be beauty on the wind that can't be bought nor sold" That's so deep and meaningful.. Inner beauty can't be bought, it can only be gained with enlightened grace of the heart. "Breathing moons, that seize your heart, being an Empress of the Universe" Awwwn, that's just beyond ethereal.. You're a Queen yourself, dear Vie. I've taken screenshot of this enchanting tribute and will always keep it close to my heart. Thank you so much for everything!! Your artistic soul shines with golden aura.. Keep writing and keep smiling, always!! :) a FAV

Tom Woody

Date: 2/11/2024 5:42:00 AM

Sweet tribute to a sweet poetess

Hiya Sharma
Date: 2/11/2024 6:14:00 AM

Awwn, you're always so kind, dear Tom.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/11/2024 5:45:00 AM

Thank you Tom, she never ceases to inspire us, with her sweet poems. Thank you for your visit this morning, have a blessed day full of inspiration and Grace.