Hitching a Ride

A tiny caterpillar clung
To the mirror on our car,
Perhaps to hitch a ride, not knowing
We were going far.

I didn’t notice he was there
‘Til we were on the road
And wondered if he’d make it
All the way to our abode.

I thought he’d hate the city,
Though, of course, there is some grass.
My worrying was wasted
For it never came to pass.

A half an hour later,
All the wind became too much.
Despite a valiant effort,
All his little feet lost touch.

I watched him blow away
Into a highway of cement,
His final day on earth, at least
That much was evident.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 8/23/2022 10:16:00 AM
That little caterpillar was taken away from his mommy too; I am sure he was ready to hit that cement!
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Date: 8/11/2022 7:59:00 PM
Ashes to ashes; cater to pillar... May the mourners be comforted... Where is the Shiva hole?! Cute one, Ilene
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Date: 8/11/2022 1:01:00 AM
What a way to go, the ride of his life. Tom
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Date: 8/10/2022 9:02:00 PM
A delightful poem, Ilene. Love the last stanza. / Maurice
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Date: 8/10/2022 12:36:00 PM
Well, at least, he gave it a valiant effort. And, think about it, he inspired a poem, so his life was not in vain!
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Date: 8/10/2022 11:56:00 AM
OR......he may come to visit you a butterfly.....with an attitude....
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Date: 8/10/2022 11:15:00 AM
So all those little legs must continue to work in harmony, or all is lost? Enjoyed, Ilene! Aloha!
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