Hit the Road, Jack

You’ll get on your feet someday? Who cares if you do or don’t? You don’t have any money. Just hit the road, Jack!

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Robin Davis

Date: 2/5/2014 11:40:00 AM

Robert You bad bad boy. Not helping out this poor guy. And I thought you were nicer than that. LOL Nicely done Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Crush You poem.

Robert Pettit
Date: 2/5/2014 1:14:00 PM

The hit song by the late Ray Charles inspired me to write this. Thanks again for reading some of my older material.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2011 7:50:00 PM

hahaha, guess he will be hitchhiking! Luv, Andrea

Skat A

Date: 1/13/2011 10:45:00 PM

a good one~Skat

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/12/2011 7:32:00 PM

Really like the sarcasm here, Robert. I don't see a lot of compassion for those in need these days. This would make a great entry for John's contest, but I notice you have another dodoitsu, so I'll check out that one too. Love, Carolyn

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/12/2011 4:32:00 PM

Aww, that's soo cold, Robert!! And not to mention, mean! lol Enjoyed reading this, Robert. Always, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/12/2011 4:19:00 PM

Another creative write Robert for the new contest.. good luck my friend.. luv that song too by Ray Charles....hit the road Jack...