Hit the Road, Jack

You’ll get on your feet someday?
Who cares if you do or don’t?
You don’t have any money.
Just hit the road, Jack!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Davis Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 11:40 AM
Robert You bad bad boy. Not helping out this poor guy. And I thought you were nicer than that. LOL Nicely done Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Crush You poem.
Pettit Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 1:14 PM
The hit song by the late Ray Charles inspired me to write this. Thanks again for reading some of my older material.
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 7:50 PM
hahaha, guess he will be hitchhiking! Luv, Andrea
A  Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 10:45 PM
a good one~Skat
Devonshire Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 7:32 PM
Really like the sarcasm here, Robert. I don't see a lot of compassion for those in need these days. This would make a great entry for John's contest, but I notice you have another dodoitsu, so I'll check out that one too. Love, Carolyn
Haick Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 4:32 PM
Aww, that's soo cold, Robert!! And not to mention, mean! lol Enjoyed reading this, Robert. Always, Annalise
Sweetheart Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 4:19 PM
Another creative write Robert for the new contest.. good luck my friend.. luv that song too by Ray Charles....hit the road Jack...
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