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Hit Me With Your Best Shot

HIT ME WITH YOUR BEST SHOT

Hello brother and how are you.
I know you been upset because of the things I am doing.
Tomorrow is just another adventurous day. 
My life is an ascertain maze.
Each extreme that I experience
Watches me within my memory.
Is it you that state I am living dangerously?
That may be the case.
Here I am for you to put me in my place.
Yet, will this mean anything at all?
Of course, I will listen and provide you with due respect.
Unless you are not that projected and
Regards become irate
Because you negate 
Essence of my personal recourse.
Such offensiveness should not be voiced.
Therefore, I am here to provide my undivided attention.
Silently, I will listen.
Helping you to remove your frustration.
Otherwise, you are fine with what I do.
To you brother, much ado.

Or else, hit me with your best shot.
However, do not stretch the truth.

Hello as well sister and you may have a seat.
I tell you that you are not at all discreet.
Today is another part of the future.
Mountains you certainly have climbed.
Each time you overcome an obstacle
We do not intertwine, nonetheless, 
I know that your life has unbind.
Thus, it is not for me to question.
However, I will discuss
Your acumen in choices
Out of all the options that was there.
Unless there was a threat even in the most
Remote form, you
Being that ideal that will unshackle
Everyone.
Such defensiveness is understood.
True, I suppose be there for you.
So you have come to chastise.
Hindrance is not forthcoming as you unbraid your hair.
Of course, I will correct you when you are wrong and have over stated yourself.
To thine self-reproof as well.

Hit me with your best shot.
Just not below the belt.
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Scribed June 21, 2015!

Copyright © Verlena S. Walker | Year Posted 2015

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/24/2015 3:33:00 AM Criticisms should make someone bettef not bitter!~olive eloisa Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 7/29/2015 6:51:00 PM That is correct Olive. Thanks for your very insightful response! Verlena

Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/23/2015 9:05:00 PM I have let others speak what they thought was truth and upon being able to hear themselves speak they drew different conclusions. When we try to prove we hold the answers others become entrenched within their perspectives. I like your poem! Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 7/29/2015 6:49:00 PM Thanks Rick for your awesome response! Verlena