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Historic Waters

Spoken by the tides, Gurgled legends of past shores: Mythical currents.

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Carrie Richards

Date: 9/19/2009 4:39:00 PM

There is so much mystery that enchants the sea...you have captured that in your wonderful haiku! ps..soupmail reply

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/18/2009 5:16:00 PM

legends of past shores spoken by the tides,yes the tides never grow old,the waters forever young watching centuries pass by..nice Haiku-Charma

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/18/2009 11:22:00 AM

Brilliant Raul. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 9/18/2009 12:15:00 AM

Great word gurgled Raul,very imagist haiku.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Ismael Nieves

Date: 9/17/2009 10:33:00 PM

Deep and outstanding words my friend.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/17/2009 4:30:00 PM

Very interesting Haiku here. Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/17/2009 4:05:00 PM

salty! Light & Love

Constance La France

Date: 9/17/2009 1:51:00 PM

I can hear those waves...ver soothing to the soul... check your mail box!

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 9/17/2009 1:25:00 PM

Interesting haiku Raul. I guess the tides would be rising, exposing the past landcape as it looked before with sunken cities at the bottom of the ocean, like the one off the coast of Japan. Interesting idea.

Date: 9/17/2009 12:31:00 PM

Nice use of personification and imagery in this poem. Your view of your writing as Heartfelt--Creative is so fitting for you. Thank you for stopping by and answering my blog question. I am enjoying all the interesting thoughts. Have a nice day. Karen