Hiss

she releases hiss, tires flat but for spouse with a spare tire. repaired, but this is amiss - her teeth release hiss

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/18/2022 3:23:00 AM

I wonder was it one tire or more than one? Anyway, neither is a good thing, but more than one double trouble. I enjoyed reading your work. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/18/2022 4:20:00 AM

Thank you, Sara!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/15/2022 12:52:00 PM

A creative write. Oh no, a flat tire~~not good. Have a blessed day..................

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/16/2022 5:22:00 AM

Thank you, sweet friend!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/15/2022 1:54:00 AM

Sure makes you mad. I thought you were busy cooking.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/15/2022 6:05:00 AM

LOL! I got a break with 2 instead of 4 boys. The two will return. Going golfing today.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/14/2022 5:16:00 PM

Where's the kiss?!... What's my beef?! ~ Sara Peller

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2022 6:17:00 PM

LOL

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/14/2022 12:00:00 PM

Frustration perfectly articulated! Hiss, indeed! I like the double meaning of the hubby with a spare tire. I have one of those! Blessings!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2022 12:47:00 PM

Also the first hiss is annoyance and the second is her sounding like a tire going flat;) Thank you!