Hiss

she releases hiss, tires flat
but for spouse with a spare tire.
repaired, but this is amiss -
her teeth release hiss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kendrick Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 3:23 AM
I wonder was it one tire or more than one? Anyway, neither is a good thing, but more than one double trouble. I enjoyed reading your work. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 4:20 AM
Thank you, Sara!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 12:52 PM
A creative write. Oh no, a flat tire~~not good. Have a blessed day..................
Rodrigues Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 5:22 AM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Buhagiar Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 1:54 AM
Sure makes you mad. I thought you were busy cooking.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 6:05 AM
LOL! I got a break with 2 instead of 4 boys. The two will return. Going golfing today.
Wolf Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 5:16 PM
Where's the kiss?!... What's my beef?! ~ Sara Peller
Rodrigues Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 6:17 PM
LOL
Kauffman Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 12:00 PM
Frustration perfectly articulated! Hiss, indeed! I like the double meaning of the hubby with a spare tire. I have one of those! Blessings!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 12:47 PM
Also the first hiss is annoyance and the second is her sounding like a tire going flat;) Thank you!
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