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His waterline of humor

He floats just above the waterline of humor I never know if he’s on the level or not, peers over the edge, on the brink of absurd rumor. Maybe human mirth has been squeezed out of him while tilting at windmills; open hostility is his escape whips out to a froth any sea of affection at his whim. It is a carefully crafted facade, and he plays it like a master like a tenantless temple looking for souls to save or a gypsy staring at his crystal bowl for any disaster. He could caress with flattery, or bite with harsh insight, uses silence as his weapon to control dialogue but turns on a smile a reassuring crescent in the night. Awareness hums between us - he’s a magician plucking out a dove of intimacy from his sleeve, then he’s gone like a shadow running from the sun. @jjote022924

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Date: 3/1/2024 10:06:00 AM
The complexity of human emotions and interactions, particularly in the context of a relationship with someone enigmatic and elusive Is well-depicted in the mysterious and unpredictable nature of the individual you describe. Your diction is rich and evocative, with imagery and metaphor to convey your feelings and perceptions. Thanks for your uplifting comment on my page.
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Josefina Costales
Date: 3/1/2024 4:46:00 PM
Thanks Sotto for your keen insights on my poem
Date: 3/1/2024 5:20:00 AM
I like that last line. Some men are like that gone like a shadow at sundown. LOL..Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Josefina Costales
Date: 3/1/2024 4:48:00 PM
LOL - so you’ve met such male specimens, but mine was just imaginary

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