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His Warmth

I thank you always sun and moon, but is his warmth that makes me move
My hands stay lingered in his palm, and trace the lines to write a song
His eyes they whisper: you still do know, of how my love will always grow
And with four lips they form hello, for goodbye they'll never know
My hands stay lingered in his palm, and trace the lines to write a song;
For each line has read, " hold on " that's why fingers clench so strong
And with four lips they form hello, for goodbye they'll never know
I love you more than can be known, and hopefully we'll find that's shown
For each line has read," hold on " that's why fingers clench so strong
His eyes they whisper: you still do know, of how my love will always grow
I love you more than can be known, and hopefully we'll find that's shown
I thank you always sun and moon, but it's his warmth that makes me move...

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Date: 9/24/2010 7:49:00 AM
lovely, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 9/23/2010 12:07:00 PM
Many congratulations Jessica on your win in Catie's lovely contest with this beautiful poetry >> James
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Date: 9/23/2010 5:40:00 AM
Congratulations Jessica for your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Love Notes". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/22/2010 9:03:00 PM
There are some really awesome lines in this pantoum. Love the way you used the hand to talk about your love. I love hand holding! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/22/2010 8:24:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem, Jessica! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/22/2010 2:18:00 PM
Congratulations on this fine win in the contest, Jessica
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Date: 9/22/2010 1:58:00 PM
Congrats Jessica on your big win in the Love Notes contest ... a wonderful write and win to enjoy my friend with luv...
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Date: 9/16/2010 10:00:00 PM
this is the winner. i love the thought and work that went into this wonderful piece of work. i felt the love and enjoyed the piece that some poetry brings naturaly. this may not be the contest but you certianly have won my high praise for the art. and from me a fellow poet i will honor you by placing this in my favs list. the highest honor that i can give for one who touched my heart. JOHN HENRY LOVING III
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Date: 9/16/2010 8:11:00 PM
Wonderful words Jessica... a great entry for Jared's contest..luv.. good luck.. hope u are doing well..enjoyed your creativity tonight...
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