His Warmth

Dawn’s warm luminescence 
   holds his pure essence…
   caresses her face through 
   her living room window
   of opportunity.
A loving presence felt,
   she melts to his soft touch
   …the sense of unity.
Words of fondness: remiss
   she cannot explain this
   emotion of oneness.
If options did exist,
   if one could understand,
   she’d cup into her hands
   his celestial body.
With stars in her eyes and
   feelings incredible,
   onto high pedestal
   she’d place undying rays...
So he might forever
   light the rest of her days.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Ashley Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 4:56 PM
Dear Rhonda, your poem softly radiates the tender beauty of a lovely longing. Your last two lines a grand finale to an exquisite piece. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Tripp Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 10:00 PM
Thank you, Susan
Callus Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 10:54 AM
This is beautiful, romantic and wrapped in emotions, Rhoda. I can feel that warmth seeping through between the lines. ~ Regards // paul
Tripp Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 10:00 PM
Thank you, Paul
Thomas Avatar
June 22, 2022 at 9:58 AM
Warming with a subtle sensuality. So lovely Rhoda.
Tripp Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 10:00 PM
Thank you FJ
Theraven Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 10:26 PM
Rhoda, 'Dawn’s warm luminescence' - You've captured it, can see the words shine through in loving eyes. Very nice. -Richard
Tripp Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 10:01 PM
Thank you
May Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 6:18 PM
Beautiful write Rhoda, best wishes
Tripp Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 10:01 PM
Aww. Thank you Joseph!
Leffanta Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 11:29 AM
Quite a Tripp! Enjoyed! Aloha!
Tripp Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 10:01 PM
Thank you Rico. Aloha!
Cunningham Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 5:38 AM
A very passionate and romantic verse Rhoda, I hope that you are keeping well. Happy thanksgiving. Tom
Tripp Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 10:02 PM
Hi Tom. Sorry it takes me forever to get back to Soup. I hope your holidays were wonderful
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