His Warmth

Dawn’s warm luminescence 
   holds his pure essence…
   caresses her face through 
   her living room window
   of opportunity.
A loving presence felt,
   she melts to his soft touch
   …the sense of unity.
Words of fondness: remiss
   she cannot explain this
   emotion of oneness.
If options did exist,
   if one could understand,
   she’d cup into her hands
   his celestial body.
With stars in her eyes and
   feelings incredible,
   onto high pedestal
   she’d place undying rays...
So he might forever
   light the rest of her days.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 7/29/2022 4:56:00 PM
Dear Rhonda, your poem softly radiates the tender beauty of a lovely longing. Your last two lines a grand finale to an exquisite piece. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 7/30/2022 10:00:00 PM
Thank you, Susan
Date: 7/29/2022 10:54:00 AM
This is beautiful, romantic and wrapped in emotions, Rhoda. I can feel that warmth seeping through between the lines. ~ Regards // paul
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 7/30/2022 10:00:00 PM
Thank you, Paul
Date: 6/22/2022 9:58:00 AM
Warming with a subtle sensuality. So lovely Rhoda.
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 7/30/2022 10:00:00 PM
Thank you FJ
Date: 12/10/2021 10:26:00 PM
Rhoda, 'Dawn’s warm luminescence' - You've captured it, can see the words shine through in loving eyes. Very nice. -Richard
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 7/30/2022 10:01:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 11/29/2021 6:18:00 PM
Beautiful write Rhoda, best wishes
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 7/30/2022 10:01:00 PM
Aww. Thank you Joseph!
Date: 11/25/2021 11:29:00 AM
Quite a Tripp! Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 7/30/2022 10:01:00 PM
Thank you Rico. Aloha!
Date: 11/25/2021 5:38:00 AM
A very passionate and romantic verse Rhoda, I hope that you are keeping well. Happy thanksgiving. Tom
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 7/30/2022 10:02:00 PM
Hi Tom. Sorry it takes me forever to get back to Soup. I hope your holidays were wonderful
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