His Voice

his voice in the hall "hi honey, what's for dinner?" my world now complete 1/28/12 Romantic Senryu Contest...

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/30/2012 9:06:00 PM

congrats BG on a wonderful win for eloquent words luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2012 4:13:00 PM

Big congrats. I think I saw this one just a day or two ago.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/30/2012 11:45:00 AM

Sure would love to hear these words, dear LNC. What a unique approach to the contest. Very creative! Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/30/2012 11:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning placement in Francine's contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/30/2012 11:22:00 AM

love the third line cut , congrats on your 7th place win Barbara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2012 10:22:00 AM

this is so sweet. IT's exactly "real life." (but my world would be more complete if I heard him saying, "where do you want to go for dinner?" hahahaha

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/29/2012 5:41:00 AM

lol....lol - :) good one Barbara!!!oxox love Anne-Lise

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/28/2012 10:58:00 PM

He sounds hungry. I hope you cooked him a very swell meal. Good senryu Barbara.

Diana-Marie Bombardieri

Date: 1/28/2012 10:19:00 PM

short and sweet! I like it! Good luck in the contest:)