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His Voice



his voice in the hall
"hi honey, what's for dinner?"
my world now complete



1/28/12
Romantic Senryu Contest...

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 30, 2012 at 9:06 PM

congrats BG on a wonderful win for eloquent words luv..

Andrea Dietrich

January 30, 2012 at 4:13 PM

Big congrats. I think I saw this one just a day or two ago.

Carolyn Devonshire

January 30, 2012 at 11:45 AM

Sure would love to hear these words, dear LNC. What a unique approach to the contest. Very creative! Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 30, 2012 at 11:31 AM

Congratulations on your winning placement in Francine's contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

January 30, 2012 at 11:22 AM

love the third line cut , congrats on your 7th place win Barbara

Andrea Dietrich

January 29, 2012 at 10:22 AM

this is so sweet. IT's exactly "real life." (but my world would be more complete if I heard him saying, "where do you want to go for dinner?" hahahaha