His Vacation In Bermuda-8 Word Challenge
His Vacation In Bermuda-8 word challenge
candy drops rain on drought stricken crops
her triple treats spiraled without any stops
his eyes span kaleidoscope
he rushes to open her envelope
ten years celibacy ending with hollow pops
the sweetness curls of her perpetual motion
the cacophony of waves pounding his ocean
a hooker curbs his hysteria
of soothing his chaotic area
Bermuda triangle's apocalypse, for him a godsend
connie pachecho
9/20/17
1. HYSTERIA 2. KALEIDOSCOPE 3. PERPETUAL 4. CHAOTIC
5. CACOPHONY 6. APOCALYPSE 7. SPIRALED 8. HOLLOW
This poem I didn't enter. I feel it wouldn't smell a rose.
I like the title, ending, how everything ties together but
it would never place.
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