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His Smile Awaits

He was my very first daydream
I thought about him all the time
Something about him made me beam

Seeing his face was so sublime
Making good grades in class was a breeze
It was his smile that was my motivation
Liking him came with such ease
Every thought of touching him came with hesitation

All I had was the way he looked at me
Waiting for his glances became my prize
A chance encounter filled me with glee
I wanted so much to feel the warmth of his eyes
Thinking of him is a great memory 
Smiles like his have become few and far between

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/2/2009 10:44:00 PM
I liked your version of the acrostic as well friend.... I thank you for your comment... You made me blush..HEhe.... And that poem was dedicated to a friend who is.......... chillin'......next.......TO.........me... I'm dumb, AHHA.... I am in a cheerful early morning mood... Thank you for your comment and big ups on this write friend......:JP]
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Date: 2/28/2009 5:30:00 AM
Congrats on your win! This is a very sweet poem, you shared these memories so well that I could see this scene clearly in my mind, the story you told with your heart. Just beautiful. :) Thanks for your kind congrats on "Little Yellow Socks" and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Amy
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Date: 2/27/2009 6:23:00 PM
brandee congrats on placing in John's contest - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/27/2009 3:55:00 PM
What a beautiful story you have made with this winning poem. Excellent Acrostic, Brandee. Congratulations on your win! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/27/2009 8:20:00 AM
Such a sweet poem! Congratulations on placing in this fun challenge!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/27/2009 7:28:00 AM
Congrats on your win in John's contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 2/16/2009 1:45:00 PM
What a tender and heartfelt write this is, Brandee. The feelings are so well expressed in this and your imagery is great! Thank you for sharing and your lovely comment. Love, Robin
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