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His Sapling Lemon Tree

Nothing unusual blossomed to welcome spring But yet, we marvel at the growth of the heart's resilience ~ In this early morning's half-lit hour to watch her fondle the branch of sour fruit, we see her smile,.....reassured.... It makes one's eyes sting As if they were burned by the fruit's tangy juice ~ He would have been pleased to know three lovely lemons survived in spite of winter's frost She fills her pockets, with the fruit of their love
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/1/2013 10:14:00 PM
A GOOD WINNING VERSE ................ GOODNIGHT *SKAT
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Date: 7/1/2013 6:16:00 AM
Ahhh, sweet Carrie, the way you toy with form makes me disgusted with my meager rhymes and treasure the work of artists like you. Your pen and ink can be so delightfully flippant at times. I just can't help loving you.... Jake
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Date: 6/28/2013 7:51:00 PM
wow, this is fantastic, Carrie. Very well deserved win.
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Date: 6/28/2013 4:39:00 PM
Lovely and Nice piece of poetry,written by a dexterous poet..Kudos to you,dear friend ..Congrats on your well deserved win....
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Date: 6/28/2013 2:10:00 PM
Carrie congratulation on your wonderful win. Well deserved. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/27/2013 7:10:00 PM
A hard task to make 3 stand alone verses that also can be read together! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 6/27/2013 6:47:00 PM
Heart felt and lovely. Congrats. BG
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Date: 6/27/2013 12:49:00 PM
Lots of sentiment here. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/13/2013 7:03:00 AM
Beautiful verse here Carrie.Loved it.
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Date: 6/10/2013 1:32:00 PM
Ahh!! This is a great one..Enjoyed reading the fruity work..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara
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Date: 6/9/2013 5:01:00 PM
i love the ending! lovely poem...
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Date: 6/9/2013 3:43:00 PM
this is just gorgeous Carrie! good luck in the contest...love,Deb
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Date: 6/9/2013 2:58:00 PM
This is definitely a winner. Good luck in the contest
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