His Sapling Lemon Tree

Nothing unusual blossomed to welcome spring But yet, we marvel at the growth of the heart's resilience ~ In this early morning's half-lit hour to watch her fondle the branch of sour fruit, we see her smile,.....reassured.... It makes one's eyes sting As if they were burned by the fruit's tangy juice ~ He would have been pleased to know three lovely lemons survived in spite of winter's frost She fills her pockets, with the fruit of their love
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 1, 2013 at 10:14 PM
A GOOD WINNING VERSE ................ GOODNIGHT *SKAT
Posey Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 6:16 AM
Ahhh, sweet Carrie, the way you toy with form makes me disgusted with my meager rhymes and treasure the work of artists like you. Your pen and ink can be so delightfully flippant at times. I just can't help loving you.... Jake
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 7:51 PM
wow, this is fantastic, Carrie. Very well deserved win.
Arowolo Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 4:39 PM
Lovely and Nice piece of poetry,written by a dexterous poet..Kudos to you,dear friend ..Congrats on your well deserved win....
Gildersleeve Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 2:10 PM
Carrie congratulation on your wonderful win. Well deserved. Warm Smiles, Connie
Guzzi Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 7:10 PM
A hard task to make 3 stand alone verses that also can be read together! Congrad's Light & Love
Gorelick Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 6:47 PM
Heart felt and lovely. Congrats. BG
Johnson Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 12:49 PM
Lots of sentiment here. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Poet Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 7:03 AM
Beautiful verse here Carrie.Loved it.
Kendrick Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 1:32 PM
Ahh!! This is a great one..Enjoyed reading the fruity work..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara
Bauer Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 5:01 PM
i love the ending! lovely poem...
Wilson Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 3:43 PM
this is just gorgeous Carrie! good luck in the contest...love,Deb
Sirak Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 2:58 PM
This is definitely a winner. Good luck in the contest
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