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His Sacrifice

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Losing worries Beneath the stardust Moments, Embracing peace Inside the soul stirring Promises, Breathing colors Hues vibrant, soothing Beautiful Like the candle’s dance Sparkling like the moon Rising beyond clouds Whispering silent rhymes Into the sapphire skies, Erasing the night with lights Blazing in fires of insight Reflecting the joy of a sunrise Flowing beyond the ridges, In windy limericks – Beating elegies, verses Visions in epics, prose, words Released by the gentling Spirit of laughter, smiles Kind and vibrant, soothing Away the disillusion, the confusion With belief that holds onto Hope, faith and love – in a grasp Handed down from His wonder His blessings of joy unimaginable, Joy alive inside the soul, Joy that believes and controls The pen, the page, the poet’s statement This is poetry’s fire lingering Inside, secrets of the soul, Exciting like the most inspiring Moment, the timelessness Inside the wise words, delighting Stirring fires of grace abiding… Across the night, Glowing, glittery glimmers Exciting the sunlight at dawn, the moon’s thoughts - With a flow of haunting Treasures in praise, prayers – Penetrating poetry – pieces of peace, Pieces of impressions Brought to life inside the one who knows His love is the everlasting hope The second chance to bring alive The remarkable, the exceptional, the Notable – the cherished thoughts, Stanza of grace, vision so startling It feels like the way through the past, Around the worries, the struggles, Through the pain and confusion – Into the miraculous place Where His light lifts all the mist away Clears the way for a new day, A new hope, a new prayer, a new Wisdom opening up the life Who knows the meaning of His sacrifice!

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Date: 3/20/2023 2:45:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning faith-based work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing ...Sara
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Date: 3/20/2023 7:12:00 AM
"A new hope, a new prayer, a new Wisdom opening up the life" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/20/2023 7:09:00 AM
Another gorgeous write Gina. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 3/20/2023 4:20:00 AM
Such a wonderful poem, Gina. Sparkling like the moon, whispering silent rhymes, conveyed a stunning metaphors. Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 3/19/2023 8:49:00 AM
I Love your poem thanks for sharing.
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