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His Present

A smile away eyes trailing Pearls worn lavender and lace Blond curls cascade past dimples He accepts her gift... ~For Michael J. Falotico~ Contest: "Spicy" Form: Dodoitsu

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Date: 1/5/2011 12:02:00 PM
This is precious, Sharon!! You create such a lovely image of this girl and the last line is a delight. I won't be entering this contest, but I expect to see your poem at the top of the winners' list. You did a terrific job with the dodoitsu form, Sharon. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/5/2011 4:39:00 AM
Nicely worded write with controlled passion. Good luck in the contest, Sharon
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Date: 1/4/2011 7:17:00 PM
I love it SHaron, good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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Date: 1/4/2011 5:17:00 PM
Really liked this..best of luck~love,Deb
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Date: 1/4/2011 4:35:00 PM
Pretty as a picture, Sharon!
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