His Present

A smile away eyes trailing

Pearls worn lavender and lace

Blond curls cascade past dimples

He accepts her gift... 








~For Michael J. Falotico~ 

Contest: "Spicy"
      Form: Dodoitsu
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Devonshire Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 12:02 PM
This is precious, Sharon!! You create such a lovely image of this girl and the last line is a delight. I won't be entering this contest, but I expect to see your poem at the top of the winners' list. You did a terrific job with the dodoitsu form, Sharon. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 4:39 AM
Nicely worded write with controlled passion. Good luck in the contest, Sharon
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January 4, 2011 at 7:17 PM
I love it SHaron, good luck in the contest,..p.d.
Wilson Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 5:17 PM
Really liked this..best of luck~love,Deb
Dietrich Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 4:35 PM
Pretty as a picture, Sharon!
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