His Overboard Tale

Ocean is more ancient than the mountains, and
freighted with the memories and the dreams of time.
—H.P. Lovecraft, The Best of H.P. Lovecraft:
Bloodcurdling Tales of Horror and the Macabre

His Overboard Tale

My captain bellows, “heave-ho.”
Off the plank I go, overboard.

I plunged into the night, entangled in
aberrant irises of the deep.

When my abject insanity rewinds,
I wish that I had swallowed the sea.

The kiss of salt and seaweed,
the wretch filled my lungs.

The Shes were more fish than maid
with huge hips and floundering tails.

The strange language of burbles,
their breasts made me gag…

Seahag hair, menacingly like Medusa’s.
I surmised sirens locks would actually bite.

My dreams capsized.
Why am I alive?

I’d rather that the chest be covered.
I shall never recover.

That’s why this landlubber
drinks and drinks, burbles.

At the end I was found on a rock.
I hit the rocks hard.

Swallow the water, lad.
Leave no room for desire.

Mermaids are a misnomer;
breaststroking in Bruichladdich proof.

Have a swim lad in this label
and stay far away from shore.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 7/16/2024 9:52:00 AM
Wow, Kim- another one! Another piece so raw in talent- and imagery- enjoyed reading,
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/16/2024 10:41:00 AM
You bring a smile to my face! Thank you!
Date: 7/14/2024 12:14:00 PM
You tickle my memories. Great poetry as usual. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2024 8:12:00 PM
lol…thank you, my friend!
Date: 7/12/2024 10:42:00 PM
quite beautiful and interesting poetry, lot of suffrerings for becoming a mermaid i guess, enjoyed you surprising poem have a "delicious" week end yann
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/13/2024 9:16:00 AM
I thought I’d imagine them less appealing :)
Date: 7/12/2024 7:00:00 PM
Ha. Mermaids seem to lose their beauty. This is very entertaining.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/13/2024 9:16:00 AM
I appreciate you, Hilda!
Date: 7/12/2024 12:18:00 PM
Intrigued by your take on the significance of the ocean to our core being, well written. One way or another, we are all drawn to the sea, we are 80% seawater, God's creatures evolved from the ocean. All my best, Robert
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/12/2024 2:26:00 PM
Thanks, Robert! Yes, many of us are drawn to the sea. Good to hear from you!
Date: 7/12/2024 11:48:00 AM
"Seahag hair, menacingly like Medusa’s. I surmised sirens locks would actually bite." -- Love it! "Have a swim lad in this label and stay far away from shore." Christianity my intoxication of choice. Totally original yet Lovecraftian Tale. Great read!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/12/2024 2:27:00 PM
Christianity, my choice too, Joe. Just having fun. A little dark humor. Thanks so much!!
Date: 7/12/2024 10:34:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun "His Overboard Tale" write. "Good Luck" if for contest. Have a great day..............................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/12/2024 10:44:00 AM
No contest. Thank you, Paula! Glad you enjoyed ~ Kim
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