His Overboard Tale

Ocean is more ancient than the mountains, and
freighted with the memories and the dreams of time.
—H.P. Lovecraft, The Best of H.P. Lovecraft:
Bloodcurdling Tales of Horror and the Macabre

His Overboard Tale

My captain bellows, “heave-ho.”
Off the plank I go, overboard.

I plunged into the night, entangled in
aberrant irises of the deep.

When my abject insanity rewinds,
I wish that I had swallowed the sea.

The kiss of salt and seaweed,
the wretch filled my lungs.

The Shes were more fish than maid
with huge hips and floundering tails.

The strange language of burbles,
their breasts made me gag…

Seahag hair, menacingly like Medusa’s.
I surmised sirens locks would actually bite.

My dreams capsized.
Why am I alive?

I’d rather that the chest be covered.
I shall never recover.

That’s why this landlubber
drinks and drinks, burbles.

At the end I was found on a rock.
I hit the rocks hard.

Swallow the water, lad.
Leave no room for desire.

Mermaids are a misnomer;
breaststroking in Bruichladdich proof.

Have a swim lad in this label
and stay far away from shore.
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Hind Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 9:52 AM
Wow, Kim- another one! Another piece so raw in talent- and imagery- enjoyed reading,
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 10:41 AM
You bring a smile to my face! Thank you!
Buhagiar Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 12:14 PM
You tickle my memories. Great poetry as usual. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 8:12 PM
lol…thank you, my friend!
Rolland Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 10:42 PM
quite beautiful and interesting poetry, lot of suffrerings for becoming a mermaid i guess, enjoyed you surprising poem have a "delicious" week end yann
Rodrigues Avatar
July 13, 2024 at 9:16 AM
I thought I’d imagine them less appealing :)
Greenhough Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 7:00 PM
Ha. Mermaids seem to lose their beauty. This is very entertaining.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 13, 2024 at 9:16 AM
I appreciate you, Hilda!
Gorelick Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 12:18 PM
Intrigued by your take on the significance of the ocean to our core being, well written. One way or another, we are all drawn to the sea, we are 80% seawater, God's creatures evolved from the ocean. All my best, Robert
Rodrigues Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 2:26 PM
Thanks, Robert! Yes, many of us are drawn to the sea. Good to hear from you!
DiMino Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 11:48 AM
"Seahag hair, menacingly like Medusa’s. I surmised sirens locks would actually bite." -- Love it! "Have a swim lad in this label and stay far away from shore." Christianity my intoxication of choice. Totally original yet Lovecraftian Tale. Great read!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 2:27 PM
Christianity, my choice too, Joe. Just having fun. A little dark humor. Thanks so much!!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 10:34 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun "His Overboard Tale" write. "Good Luck" if for contest. Have a great day..............................
Rodrigues Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 10:44 AM
No contest. Thank you, Paula! Glad you enjoyed ~ Kim
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