His Offer

For God so loved the world
(Including you and me)
That He gave his only begotten Son
(He came to set us free)
That whomsoever believeth in Him
(His one and only request)
Shall not perish
(Unlike the rest)
But shall have everlasting life.
(Away from this world's strife).

Quoted from John 3-16 with my words in parenthesis.

For John's contest  Won a first
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Brown Avatar
January 5, 2012 at 11:56 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Faith Verses" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
Arno Avatar
December 31, 2011 at 10:01 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem :) Best regards, Jon
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 11:18 AM
I enjoyed the clever way you presented your entry, Joyce. May the new year bless you beyond measure. Congrats on your win.
Lanford Avatar
December 29, 2011 at 5:48 PM
Wonderful, Joyce! Congratulations!
Freeman Avatar
December 29, 2011 at 2:24 PM
Great central truth Joyce, Merry Seasons and Happy new Reasonings in the New Year... I am honored that your chose to enter my contest... My hope is that you find honor in your placement. Agape, Moses
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December 28, 2011 at 6:13 PM
"only begotten son"
Andresen Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 11:17 AM
This was something to think about. OXOX love Anne-Lise
Kendrick Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 11:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your paraphasing of the scripture..Great testimony of your faith..Belief is all that is needed..It is so esay that is what seems to make it hard..Sara
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