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His Name Is Liberty(Not What You Exspect)

Trys to tell me im bound becuz he cant see,he is the key that sets the shackels free.tells me life should be less strain but he is all that takes my pain...away, he is a cool breeze to my hot summer day.I want to yell and tell him i need him here forever!!Like a bird needs its feathers to fly.He must not say goodbye,unless i shall not be freed.and left here to die.to dry up in the sun like a raisen waiting for the end of the day.Left standing as he walks away.And those chains they bind me once again like they are here to stay.as soon as he is gone my constraint seems to grow.Like love never did flow through these veins.But his touch is enough to loose these chains.I KNOW!.Because he was here and i was free,and i wish to be where id be with him,and he with me......eternaly. His name is liberty.

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Date: 6/20/2009 8:44:00 PM
Yei, love is energy and energy flows, freedom feels like a threedimentionalized line flowing =D yei I like your style of grammar jojojo no rules C= thanks for sharing yei!!
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Date: 6/13/2009 12:22:00 AM
Smile~Yes, love and companionship can be liberty!! And upon the other hand Rebecca, freedom also offers her liberty!! Thus I find a double edged purpose to this wonderful poem of Yours--Fulfilling within both ways as served!!? Again, "You" prove to be a very gifted writer; with wisdom and passion at Your helm~"Excellent"~"Love & Warmth to You & Yours, John!!:) Bye ~
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