His Mom's Roses

A girl.
A boy.
A Ford convertible.
His mom’s rose bushes.

To please her,
he cut the flowers
and filled his car to the brim
with his mom’s roses.

He came to call,
rag top down,
backseat overflowing
with his mom’s roses.

She acquiesced
gave him a kiss,
filled her bath tub
with his mom’s roses.

She never learned
his consequence,
only knew she reveled
in his mom’s roses.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 10:08 AM
Nicely penned variables, Linda, for mom's roses retained, my compliments on your win, Aloha William
Fowler Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 12:28 PM
Aloha William. Many thanks and the most blessed and happiest new year to you!
Goldsmith Avatar
December 29, 2022 at 2:08 PM
I love pink roses. This is a fun story/write. Blessings...........
Fowler Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 6:57 AM
Many thanks Paula. hugs :)
Volumes Avatar
December 29, 2022 at 12:49 PM
Wow Linda, did she ever see him again? Fabulous poetry ! kinda scary.. but I loved it.
Fowler Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 7:34 AM
LOL Wendy. Indeed. It must have been a minor nuisance to her. He survived whatever punishment came!
Volumes Avatar
December 29, 2022 at 2:01 PM
The scary part was what his Mom did when she saw her rose bushes. lt was a lovely poem though Linda.
Fowler Avatar
December 29, 2022 at 1:30 PM
Ah Wendy. Scary? It was a sweet, but short-lived romance. I never found out what his mom said/did when she saw her bald rose bushes! LOL
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