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His Mom's Roses

A girl. A boy. A Ford convertible. His mom’s rose bushes. To please her, he cut the flowers and filled his car to the brim with his mom’s roses. He came to call, rag top down, backseat overflowing with his mom’s roses. She acquiesced gave him a kiss, filled her bath tub with his mom’s roses. She never learned his consequence, only knew she reveled in his mom’s roses.

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Date: 12/31/2022 10:08:00 AM
Nicely penned variables, Linda, for mom's roses retained, my compliments on your win, Aloha William
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/31/2022 12:28:00 PM
Aloha William. Many thanks and the most blessed and happiest new year to you!
Date: 12/29/2022 2:08:00 PM
I love pink roses. This is a fun story/write. Blessings...........
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/31/2022 6:57:00 AM
Many thanks Paula. hugs :)
Date: 12/29/2022 12:49:00 PM
Wow Linda, did she ever see him again? Fabulous poetry ! kinda scary.. but I loved it.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/31/2022 7:34:00 AM
LOL Wendy. Indeed. It must have been a minor nuisance to her. He survived whatever punishment came!
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Date: 12/29/2022 2:01:00 PM
The scary part was what his Mom did when she saw her rose bushes. lt was a lovely poem though Linda.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/29/2022 1:30:00 PM
Ah Wendy. Scary? It was a sweet, but short-lived romance. I never found out what his mom said/did when she saw her bald rose bushes! LOL

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