His Last Praise

To the tranquil heavens he raised
his last words, the soldiers he praised
for their bravery in killing little innocent children
and their strength in abusing the weak brethren

To the vast blue skies he raised
his last poetic voice, the dictators he praised
for their hearts of stone that killed many living flesh
and their eyes that rejected the hungry while they eat fresh

To the smooth sailing clouds he raised
his last voice, the heroes he praised
for their courage to risk their spirit to save
their race and their lives are the gifts they gave

To the warm embrace of the wind he raised
his last gratified song, the mothers he praised
for their small voice in begging compassion
their ardent love for their family is raging with passion

To the spirit from the gas chamber he raised
his last breath, the future survivors he praised
for their silence and tough faith
he wished for their triumph over uncertain fate

To the darkness of his sight he raised
his last prayer, his God he praised
for giving devils that let him hold a candle to light
and for teaching him to make worth of his life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Heck Avatar
November 30, 2008 at 5:35 AM
Nadine - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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November 15, 2008 at 2:46 PM
Splendiferous indite!!! very splendiferous indite!!! Tries bien! Cardinal
Winter Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 8:56 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
November 1, 2008 at 7:10 PM
Nadine - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
Brown Avatar
October 28, 2008 at 10:26 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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October 4, 2008 at 7:55 AM
Congratulations of being featured this week. This poem flows with such reverence. I like how the title in integrated into the lines. Keep singing praises. Great job! ~Joseph
Brown Avatar
October 4, 2008 at 6:06 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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September 24, 2008 at 6:41 AM
Congratulations Nadine on "His Last Praise" being featured. God Bless. Vince
Winter Avatar
September 22, 2008 at 6:14 AM
Congratulations Nadine on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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