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Written on May 25, 2025

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His kiss, Breathless Bliss



in a million words,
	I couldn’t say
my heart’s trembling, thumping away
		apprehensive
	yet full of thanks…

as his light softly touches
	my lips – a soulful silence
		still as the music who plays
when the wind seeks her lovers
the leaves, the trees…

seem to shudder, erasing the past
with a joy that flutters awake
stirring, encouraging, embracing

so the light falls over the last story
	of yesterday, the moment
		when his lips held my own
in a silent thought, 
	a breathless poem…
written by two hearts, pouring out
love that is beyond words,
love that cannot be heard…

love this alive is assured, secure, sure
love that comes from the kiss
that just keeps blowing, blowing, blowing
in the satiny sounds
of wind who keeps coming around.

His kiss is like the moment I found
	a story that wouldn’t make a sound
		yet, would tell of love that feels alive
love that will always survive,
whatever comes, I’ll always know
His kiss breathed light through my soul
His kiss is a kiss that I know
	comes to bring hearts hope
		a kiss meant to sing joy
			through every thought
a kiss that means love is most surely A L I V E
more powerful than the stories I write,
more wonderous than the feelings that abide
reminding me why I’m A L I V E…

He kissed away the shadows of my life
	with a gentle that left me full of hope
		a song that sings light to my soul!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 5/27/2025 4:37:00 AM
- Back with a congratulation, Gina :) - hugs
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Date: 5/25/2025 10:07:00 AM
What a wonderful write/story and picture. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a lovely day writing away..................
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Date: 5/25/2025 7:27:00 AM
- Beautifully written, Gina :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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