His Kind of Love

I am my father’s daughter —
quiet when it matters,
loud when it doesn’t,
loyal like a bruise that never fades.

He was a man of few words
and too many beers,
a homebody with calloused hands
who built his love from paychecks, plywood,
and patched fences.
He didn’t say much,
but he never let us go without.

We all worked with him —
held tools before toys,
learned to measure twice, cut once,
and use what we had
to make what we needed.

He handed me a hammer
like it was a promise.
Taught me how to build things
that wouldn’t fall apart.
And somehow,
that became a kind of love too.

He taught me the stillness of fishing —
how to listen for the pull,
how to wait without wanting too much.
He showed me rivers
the way some fathers show their daughters cathedrals.
And when I stand near water now,
he’s the first name that echoes back.

His anger could shake the walls,
but his lessons still hold:
Don’t waste. Don’t lie.
Always bait your own hook.

I used to sit
in the passenger seat of his silence,
learning how love doesn’t always speak,
but shows up every morning
with boots on
and something heavy in its hands.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 8/3/2025 8:30:00 PM
Sarah, Winners in the parents lottery of hugs? Seems more of a thing than I would've ever guessed. As kids we love them unconditionally once shown the way; taught what that means. This poem, so wonderful in detail. Any dad would be proud, and sure that he is. -Richard
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Sarah Moncada
Date: 8/5/2025 2:09:00 PM
Thank you, Richard.
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