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His Heart - My Gem

the line to his heart
intricate and delicate
a jewel I found...

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Valerie Staton

January 27, 2019 at 6:59 AM

Nicely written!

Jayne Eggins

October 1, 2010 at 5:28 AM

Lovely Senryu Congrates on having your poem featured this week Wilma love Jayne

Poet Destroyer A

September 29, 2010 at 8:15 AM

Hello! Wilma, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d."

Skat A

September 29, 2010 at 8:15 AM

WILMA , CoNGRATULATIoNS oN HAVING YoUR PoEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT

Vince Suzadail Jr.

September 28, 2010 at 6:24 PM

Congrats Wilma on being featured this week. Vince

Joy Wellington

September 27, 2010 at 7:54 AM

Congrats Wilma!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 27, 2010 at 6:40 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Wilma. Love, Carol

Iolanda Scripca

September 26, 2010 at 6:35 PM

Beautiful Senryu here, dear Wilma. Congratulation on being featured this coming week. Love, iolanda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 26, 2010 at 3:06 PM

Congrats Wilma on your featured poem this week on the Soup my friend.. a nice one to share with us all today with luv...

James Fraser

September 25, 2010 at 11:56 AM

A most deserved win with this Senyru gem Wilma >> James

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

September 24, 2010 at 5:26 PM

so much said in 3 lines, Wilma-- wonderful senryu on the line challenge! & uh-oh you should be sleeping by now! me I never was able to sleep anymore-- you see what happens?? so go to sleep!! Congrats with this one :)-- hugs nikko ;)