His Forgotten Valentine

There's a promise that he made,
As he kissed me in the hallway.
My cheeks were a reddish shade,
As he promised to forever stay.

My heart I have given to him;
I expected to have his in return.
As the lights around went dim,
My love had crash and burn.

In facebook I saw his latest post
With a picture of his newest girl.
It says there, "I love her the most,
And she is 'My Valentine Girl'."

I wasn't sure how I should feel
We were over for many years.
Seeing that, my world stood still
And I remembered all my tears.

I have offered him my forever,
Yet he still left me all alone.
To forget my love, will I ever?
'Coz this pain runs to the bone.

His promise that's been broken
Is buried deep within my heart.
His kisses had left me shaken,
I was not prepared to be apart.

I was supposed to be the one
That he now calls his Valentine.
Instead, I turn into this no one;
I became his Forgotten Valentine.





*For 'The Forgotten Valentine Contest'.
*Written February 11, 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 10:39 AM
Belated congratulations on your win Grushen luv xx
Guazon Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 10:47 AM
Thank you! I never expected it but I'm glad I won. Made me realize I can really make poems. :)
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February 11, 2013 at 9:15 PM
Grushen:-) ... Congratulations, with your awesome poem in Debra s "The Forgotten Valentine... " contest... glad to see you on the winning list. Always & Forever* PD
Guazon Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 9:37 PM
Thank you so much!!! :) I never thought I'd win, Thank you so much!!!! :)
Johnson Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 6:23 PM
So sad but there will be other loves. Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce
Guazon Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 9:40 PM
Thank you so much!!! :) I couldn't believe I got the 3rd place. I'm so happy. :) Thank you. :)
Squyres Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 12:49 PM
This poem is just so sweet !! Now I know who wrote it. Thank you for entering my first contest on the soup...and Congratulations on your 3rd place win !!
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February 11, 2013 at 9:43 PM
Thank you so much!!! Although I don't know much about poems aside from free verse, thank you very much for liking it and picking me for third place. It means so much to me. Thank you so much!
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