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His First Surf

. A Step Into the seas hope and fear curiosity steer explore is - Man’s Nature A recall A return. call Inevitable. connect. Invite Exploration. Seeks. explorer Waiting in the breath A Surge To ride the crest. To Penetrate Soak in it all of the. magic Turn of the boy. Awaits To dive in explore to ride To Paddle SteerTo Be A Man No Dolls for Real Boys Yay now Coursing the unknown. Me I Know not What on earth is…Fear Here Cling not to Straws Real No fables Follies Teach me Deter Explore Chart As I Waddle . crash The Waves For My Very First Surf ………. This is an attempted visual poem …In words drawn. An ode to a picture …Of A young boy with His Surfboard …Stepping into Ocean For His First Surf

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Date: 11/24/2023 11:45:00 PM
Very creative!
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