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His Eyes

Beside the railway barefooted I walk into silhouetted trails: And as twilight descends upon cascading tears of nothingness~ old pavement darkens until all I see is a quandary of black labyrinths Leading me into indigo horizon. Darkness besets me like shadowed daydreams that keep coming back haunting me softly whilst morose hymn soars to night's phantasm. In slumber I fall~ whelming in darkness; As he comes closer to me with eyes effulgent melting in my dreams my torch returning and I no longer wander in the dark. 15 April 2021 For " Anacreontic Verse Poetry Contest" Sponsored by Silent One 1st Place Entered for “A Brian Strand Your Choice Poetry Contest”

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Date: 1/2/2023 9:18:00 PM
To one in darkness, the uniting with a loved one opens a new horizon of light and dreams. LOVELY poem dear Jez
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Date: 12/23/2022 5:19:00 AM
wow you have so much talent, love this one
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Date: 8/5/2021 11:46:00 AM
JCB, I enjoyed reading your poem! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 8/1/2021 10:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Your Eyes" is a wonderful story/write. Enjoy your win with blessings................
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Date: 7/29/2021 2:48:00 PM
Hi JCB,, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/29/2021 9:37:00 AM
Ohhh.... brilliantly written....congratulations......
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Date: 7/29/2021 6:48:00 AM
Sorry, I've not been around.. Not much free time at the moment, and that means not enough time for Poetry Soup... Thank you for writing for my contest and apologies it took so long to judge.. Congratulations on your placement...
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Date: 6/5/2021 2:57:00 AM
Wow... Just chanced to read this beauty... "melting in my dreams...... I no longer wander in the dark"... so romantic my friend... Hugs.. ~ Ani
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Date: 4/27/2021 8:21:00 PM
So touching, Dear Friend. You have a gift of painting a picture with words. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 4/27/2021 7:50:00 PM
Beautifully written with so much grace. Your lines are thick with craft and fascination. Great work.
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