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His eyelashes were next to mine that night I gazed into dark eyes that drank me in like a fine wine. I felt as if I were a prize! Reverently he traced my face. His eyelashes were next to mine. Oh, never will my mind erase the sweetness of that night divine. He teased me that it was a sign. When eyes meet, butterflies can kiss. His eyelashes were next to mine, and all that followed was pure bliss! I can’t recall stars in the sky, but I could feel my spirit shine because a star that night was I! His eyelashes were next to mine.
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