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For Sotto Poet's Any Topic Any Form Poetry Contest

His eyelashes were next to mine that night I gazed into dark eyes that drank me in like a fine wine. I felt as if I were a prize! Reverently he traced my face. His eyelashes were next to mine. Oh, never will my mind erase the sweetness of that night divine. He teased me that it was a sign. When eyes meet, butterflies can kiss. His eyelashes were next to mine, and all that followed was pure bliss! I can’t recall stars in the sky, but I could feel my spirit shine because a star that night was I! His eyelashes were next to mine.

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Date: 9/17/2023 10:04:00 AM
Fabulous quatern Andrea. So romantic. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 9/15/2023 2:42:00 PM
I am truly delighted to offer my sincere congratulations for your well-earned win in my contest. Your poetry is truly awe-inspiring.
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Date: 9/14/2023 1:36:00 AM
Very cute, Andrea:)
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Date: 9/14/2023 12:12:00 AM
Beautiful. This man I love, husband of mine, his eyelashes - so beautiful, long and dark, were amazing when we were teens and still, today, send my heart thrills. this is a gorgeous write. Love it. God bless you, love, Gina
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