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His Double-Edged Sword

She is wearing a smile on her sexy lingerie, Shining like a stars as she step down the stairs. Humming a soft tone of a lyrics she made. And thunder came in and break the silence. She starts chillin' and turn a place to hide in. But her catastrophe seems like no ending. The edge of his sword penetrates on her flesh. She is wounded, blood scatters on the wall. No one can save her dying soul..--- She screams...aloud but no one could hear. The trembling voice buried her to dungeon. Who can take her away from hell..-- Who can annihilate the sword of a beast. No one..until she rise up and break his neck! ** 6th Place Winner in Dr. Ram Mehta's Contest: A Missed Poem**

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Date: 3/14/2014 1:13:00 PM
Thanks for the comment on my blog, Lol...didn't think anyone goes reading them blogs. sweet. just like the win right here. Skat
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/14/2014 1:27:00 PM
I always tell my seatmate 'bout poetrysoup and all about us..I even introduce you, linda and some of our poets... And when I opned your photo on your blog..we saw that one with your "big atomic bomb!" ..we turned out like this...HUUUUUWWWWWOOOOOW!!!!! lol!!! you're a goddess!!! ..^__^
Date: 3/12/2014 3:31:00 PM
atta girl, aiyah.. sweet congrats!..huggs
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/12/2014 3:51:00 PM
THANK YOU , nette!!!! big hugs!!!! ^__^
Date: 3/12/2014 6:32:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in my contest and thanks for the participation, Aiyah
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/12/2014 7:41:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dr. Ram!!! ...it's always a pleasure to participate in your contest!! ..^__^
Date: 12/18/2013 11:45:00 AM
disturbing and effective.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/18/2013 11:50:00 AM
Thank you, Richard :)
Date: 12/18/2013 11:17:00 AM
what a strong., daring write filled with piercing lines...ang beautiful nito,aiyah.. SOUP MAIL.. huggs
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/18/2013 11:38:00 AM
thank you ,Nette.. :) your poems are my inspiration..thanks for the visit! ..^_^
Date: 12/17/2013 10:29:00 PM
The ending was a great surprise. Awesome poem here! Always, Laura
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/18/2013 9:11:00 AM
Nice to have you, Laura.. :)) thanks for the visit..I appreciate it much :') ..loveLots!! ^_^
Date: 12/17/2013 6:01:00 PM
She is strong! I love this poem! You express your poetry in a delightful way. original and so creative. You rock poetry! 7 stars, Chuck
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/18/2013 9:14:00 AM
my dear, Chuck..how can I express the gratitude that I feel..everytime your words appeared on my screen??..hehe..thanks a Lot! :()

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